Please evaluate this deck. I am open minded to whatever comments you make and, if, possible, I'll edit the deck to what you guys recommend.

Thanks in Advance ;)

This deck is made with the Advanced Format Forbidden List in mind:

Monsters:

Star LVL 1-4: 20

1x Dummy Golem
1x Medusa Worm
1x Dark Mimic LV 1
2x Muka Muka
1x La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp
1x Winged Dragon, Guardian of the Fortress #1
1x Gale Lizard
1x The Dragon Dwelling in the Cave
1x Gray Wing
1x Destroyer Golem
1x Elephant Statue of Disaster
1x Fuhsi No Tori
1x Charcoal Impachi
1x Warrior Dai Grepher
1x Giant Soldier of Stone
1x Mask of Darkness
1x Man-Eater Bug
1x Rare Metal Dragon
1x Element Dragon
1x Skull Red Bird

Star LVL 5-6: 0

Star LVL 7-8: 3
1x Ryu-Ran
1x Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1x Megarock Dragon

Ritual Monsters: 1
1x Relinquished

Magic: 14
1x Dian Keto the Cure Master
1x Ookazi
1x Black Pendant
1x Meteor of Destruction
1x Dragon's Gunfire
1x Dark Hole
1x Fissure
1x Black Illusion Ritual
1x Double Spell
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Soul of the Pure
1x Spell Absorbtion
1x Mountain
1x Tremendous Fire

Traps: 10
1x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Magic Jammer
1x Seven Tools of the Bandit
1x A Rival Appears!
1x Dragon's Rage
1x Physical Double
1x Enchanted Javelin
1x Thunder of Ruler
1x Conscription
1x Gravity Bind

TOTAL: 48 Cards

well...umm...


...what exactly are you looking for in a deck?

Do you:

Want to finish them of quickly
Toy with them, slowly taking their LifePoints restricting them from doing anything
Kill them of in an unusual way
Quickly bring out your forces and beat em up from there
Fuse mnstrs together to make even better ones
...and the list goes on...

I suggest:

Toon Deck: involves using cartoony mnstrs to attack yur opp. LP directly. This deck type needs the magic card Toon World and must keep that card out of the Graveyard in order to be successful.

Warrior Deck: involves swarming out a bunch of knights out very, very quickly. Very effective!

Zombie Deck: pretty much the same as warriors but they tend to keep coming back after they die. One of my favorites...

Dragon Deck: uses Dragons to take care of yur enemy by using different methods of fighting. Effective if built right...

Water Deck: Pure awesomenessnessness!! This deck brings out what would normally be tribute monsters and treats them like a non-tribute and guards yur ocean dwellers. This is one of my FAVORITES!!!...so far

Burn Deck: Very good. Although I have never been an owner of a burn deck, they will burn your opponents LP to ashes without much attacking. In one turn you can easily bring yur opponents LP to minimal/nothing. Very good deck type...

Machine Deck: a mix of a burn deck and a beatdown(which is pure brute strength). My friend owns a machine deck and it is pure awesomeness!

Fiend Deck: uses demons to attack yur enemy. most common form is beatdown.

Ojama Deck: many ppl think this deck is stupid, but its not...This deck is really good. Basically, the point is to not allow your opponent to do anything...at all. I own an Ojama Deck and it works well(emphasis on well, you might need a little luck...or I need a little luck)

Spellcaster Deck: I don't know much about this but I know that ther is alot of magic use. I got beat by this deck alot of times...

Elemental Hero Deck: fuses monsters known as Elemental Heros creating kick butt beasts. I think its pretty good...

Mixed Deck: a deck w/ no path. There really isnt a specific type of monsters that are used in this. Very good for beginners, but can also be good for experts.

...well the list goes on...but your deck has alot of stuff that will mess you up...

But its...good but dont expect alot of wins(or any at all)...

You just gotta take some stuff and add new things... if only you lived in Florida and I might help you out(Miami would be nice...and in Doral would be awesome)

Well.... I do have Toon World and some toons but I usually found that I rarely get the chance to bring them out and when I do it drains LP. I do value thier uses tho, don't get me wrong, but with the opponets I've faced..... toon won't do me much good.

I am attempting to make a Dragon Deck with some Burning capability.... unfortunately I don't have some key cards for those type of decks like Lord of D. for example.

The rocks are there to fuel Megarock Dragon and some of them have some nifty effects like Dummy Golem and Medusa Worm. Giant Soldier of Stone is usually a pretty reliable defense against a lot of monster attacks. However, I might actually tone down the number of Rock monsters in there and put in a few more Dragons.

As for my Magics, a good amount of them are LP manipulation (hence the Burn side of the deck), some for monster destroying and the rest are miscellaneous.

My Traps generally make an attempt to stop my opponet's attack and possibly counter them with some combos that might be able to turn the tide in a Duel (i.e. Gravity Bind/Relinquished, A Rival Appears!/Blue-Eyes or Rare Metal Dragon)

I'll make some changes to make it more of a Dragon Deck.

- 1x Dummy Golem
- 1x Elephant statue of Disaster
- 1x Fushi No Tori
- 1x Conscription
+ 1x A Wingbeat of a Giant Dragon
+ 1x One-Eyed Shield Dragon
+ 1x Just Desserts
+ 1x Misploymerisation

If you really want a Dragon Deck, you should have:

Tyrant Dragon
Armed Dragon LV. 3-7 and/or Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV. 4-8
Luster Dragon
Elemental Dragon
Spear Dragon
Twin-Headed Behemoth
Masked Dragon
Exiled Force
Kaiser Dragon or Twilight Dragon
Troop Dragon/Spirit Ryu/Gray Wing

...just some suggestions

Well I have Troop Dragon... but only 1 though, I have Gray Wing and Element Dragon. I have a friend who has a Luster Dragon, I'll see what I can do bout gettin that, he might also have Spear Dragon. As for the others, I don't know anyone that has em.

Thanks for the advice

Well...I have 3 Tyrant Dragons. I might be able to give you one(but my Japanese one tho if thats ok)...