OK, how about this?
The
Breath of Fire [SPELL/CONTINUOUS]
(looks like a pirate ship with ten guns, two of them in the front and back and four on each side; four sails; several openings in the sides for oars; a bunch of pirates aboard and the name
Breath of Fire on the side near the front)
Sacrifice both "Crew of the
Breath" and "Captain Evan LeFontainne" from your side of the field to activate this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any attacks made against a card of the pirate subtype will cost the attacker 300 LP per attack.
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Crew of the
Breath [WATER]
****
(looks like a bunch of pirates with flame symbols on their clothes standing on the deck of the
Breath of Fire)
[Pirate/Effect]
When this card is tributed to summon a monster of 7+ stars, this card may be treated as two tributes by paying 200 LP.
ATK: 1700 DEF: 1000
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Captain Evan LeFontainne [WATER]
******
(looks like a scruffy-haired, clean shaven man with a pistol in one hand and a rapier in the other, with a cutlass on his right hip and a longsword on his lft hip. He is wearing a cape with flames on a black background, is shirtless and is wearing baggy pants with knives and guns around the thighs and ankles.)
[Pirate/Effect]
This card cannot be summoned unless the tribute monster is a level four pirate subtype with the name
Breath of Fire in its name. Every time a pirate subtype with said name contents is attacked, destroy the attacking monster and deal the difference in ATK to your opponent's LP.
ATK: 2750 DEF: 1800
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Gunner of the
Breath of Fire [WATER]
****
(looks like a member of the crew of the
Breath manning a cannon and blasting at stuff)
[Pirate/Effect]
On each of your standby phases, place one counter on this card. When three counters are on this card, you may activate the following effects:
- draw two cards
- destroy one monster on either side of the field
ATK: 1950 DEF: 1500
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Raider of the
Breath of Fire [WATER]
****
(looks like a member of the crew of the
Breath using a sword to attack a passenger of a ship)
[Pirate/Effect]
When his card attacks, no trap cards or monster effects can be activated. Pay 400 LP every time this card attacks.
ATK: 1700 DEF: 1350
>:( how's that? >:(