Name:Twyla Serena Burke
Age:11
Bloodline:Muggleborn
House:Ravenclaw
Apperance:Blonde,Light Blue Streaks,Blue eyes,Skinny and tanned.
Character Personality:A Leo so likes attention,a natural leader and very feisty.
History:Twyla Burke is youngest daughter to muggles mother being nurse Dayna Burke and father being a journalist David Burke.Her elder sister Tara Burke is 2 years older than her and also attends hogwarts.Twyla first showed signs of magic at the age of 6 when she was staying at her grandmothers house and she forgot her teddybear she had emptyed her bag when she saw her teddybear on the bed.
Tara on the other hand had her first sign when she was 5 when she was marrying her barbies as she said you may now kiss the bride the groom lend over and kissed the bride on his own accord.When Taras Hogwarts letter arrived Dayna and David were very weary and were not going to let her go they thought it was a scam.Until the Hogwarts gameskeeper burst through the door and told them all about it apart from Twyla she had such a big tantrum she smashed all the windows by magic.After they had finished talking the gameskeeper came in and talked to Twyla saying that she soon would be going to Hogwarts.When Twyla was telling her muggle friend Taylor what happened she didn't beleive a word of it and started telling all the muggle children what a freak she was and beleived her.When Twyla and Taylor were fighting (verbally of course)Twyla got so angry she blew off Taylor's hair and they never spoke again but now Twyla is making friends at Hogwarts and inn her opion there couldn't be anything beter
Year:1
Special Talents:Good Singer and plays the Guitar.
Favourite Class:Transfiguration
Worst Class:History Of Magic.
Pet:Owl
Tywla was sneaking out of the common room one night when a horrible,grouchy prefect grabbed har arm and said"I'll take house points off right now if you don't get back into bed this instant!"Twyla says"Me and my friends are going to study at the libary at night cause it isn't so cramped and loud"Twyla felt very nevous she wasn't sure wether the prefect would beleive her story or not but she hoped he would she didn't want to get a detention.
Other:Twyla is an animagus a white hare with black paws
Registration Office Receipt

Name: Twyla Burke
Which registration are you paying for: Animagus
Amount Paid:$10
Valut Number: # 26071996
Animagus License: #0017

REMY-SALINAS

~APPROVED~

Your bio is all good, especially your History, apart from your RP sample. It needs to be writen as if you were RPing. :)

Is that better?

I agree with Shonkie. I don't know what you had before, but could you please expand your RPG. Remember that all RPG posts on the site actually need to be 2-3 full lines long, so this is a good place to practice. Why dont you add how you were feeling when you were walkng down the hall, how you felt when the prefect caught you? Did you expect him to believe your story? Were you worried that you were about to get detention? I really love your actualy bio, just need to touch the RPG up a bit. :)

I eitted it so is that better?

Yup! Congrats, you're approved! :) Feel free to keep your bio as a diary or a place for your special registrations such as ANWA/Animagus, etc.

thanks for that oh and by the way have you or remy created the detention for scribbling on the stall or do we have to do it?

Remy's doing yours so you should ask him. I've already got one going for Ankaa and Cassie. :)

K Thanks