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Alias: Jodes
Age:15
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Other Characters: N/A
FALLING FROM THE SKIES
Full Name: Jodie Christine Lankive
Nicknames: Chatterbox
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Birthday: 3/24/1992
Astrological Sign: Aries
Sexual Orientation: N/A
Grade: 10th
Clique: Royals
School Activities: Drama, Cheerleading
Power: (Choose one, please.) Ability to transform
SHINING OH SO BRIGHTLY
Personality Traits: Preppy, rude, happy, funny, stubborn (Five main personality traits, please.)
General Personality: Jodie is not your average Royal. She's rude and mean and preppy to everyone else but her friends. Otherwise, she's happy and funny and a great person to be around with. All her friends are Royals and pushes around the Uniques.
Also, she HAS to be the leader. She's a natural born which, a lot of people hate. She dosn't make stupid choices like drinking and smoking either. Really, if you're her friend, that's actually really good, she's nice. If you're not, you're going to wish you were! Either way, she only hangs out with Majestics and Royals. She's a bit of a Drama Queen though. It's not one of her main traits but, she is. She'll over react on really dumb stuff.
Likes: Being the Boss
Royals
Majestics
Having Fun
Teasing people who arn't her friends.
Drama
Cheerleading
Herself
Dislikes: People who pretend to be her friend.
People who talk behind her back.
People who think they're in charge of her.
Nerds
Not being right
When her friends are sad
Habits: Chewing her nails, doing stupid cheers in a random place, cracking her knuckles.
Pet Peeves: When people think they're so cool and talk about gross stuf.
FLITTING JUST LIKE FIREFLIES
Height & Weight: 5'6 115 lb
Piercings/Tattoos: Only her ears. Again, Jodie dosn't do stuff like that.
Picture: The link:http://img2.timeinc.net/people/i/2007/startracks/070702/miley_cyrus.jpg
Appearance: This diva has beautiful dark brown hair that she's obsessed with. It actually grew into something she loved. She's fairly skinny with her blue eye. Yes,she's pretty and brags about it only to people other tahn her friends.
Her style is really shown in the picture. She's a prep but, she only wears jeans. I told you, she's a weird prep. The shirt is definately her style. Everyday she tries to look her best. She dosn't want to be insulted. She'll wear a necklace like that and charm bracelet. Her earrings arn't huge.
For her makeup, she'll sometimes over use it. Sometimes she dosn't. It depend on the day, time and mood she's in. On a good day (like in the pic) she'll use it well. On bad days, she'll overuse it. (Two to three paragraphs, at least.)
SHOWING THE WAY TO HEAVEN
Family Members: Karen (Mom) 46, Computer Education Buisness Owner, Aaron (Dad) 47 Fitness Manager, Lizzie (Sister) 12 (Name, age, family position, and job.)
Pet(s): Ruby and Comet (Dogs) and Zippy (Lizard)
Financial Status: Moderate
History: Jodie had a terrible life, her parents died and the head of the orphange beat her! Yah right.
On March 24, 1992 Jodie Lankive was born. She was a normal baby. As she grew into her tot years, weird things seemed to happen. Nothing huge. Her parents cared for her and she loved them. Typically, Jodie was nromal. She was also cute but, all babies were wern't they. She'd stare at you though, which made her mom worried.
Actually, Jodie was a very nice girl growing up. She was still funny and happy. It was all untill seventh grade. That was a big year. She hang out with the preps now and strange things started to happen. Her parents wern't worried. Why should they? They were magic. She started to talk back too and cop attitudes. As usual, deep inside she was still a good person. She could act rude to people not her friends though.
Why were her parents normal? Well, they felt they were protecting her? They didn't know. At the time things were Ok and they'd tell her when she got into the Academy. Mainly, because they have to have a living. Though now, her parents use magic. (Three to four paragraphs, at least.)
OH, AND FOR JUST YOU AND I
Magic Words: Love (Something she wants but, never truly had)
RP Sample: Morning again and a rainy day, as she let down her beautiful dark brown hair that she loved so much as she threw it back. Everyday she curled it and ironed it. Of course she was grumpy every morning and could get frustrated but, she couldn’t go to eat without her hair perfect. Maybe there was some spell to make it perfect but, she was still a third year.
Even though she loved her hair she thought, “how’d it save you,” and certainly, there was no way. So getting all her beloved supplies, she started. First, she wet her hair so, all the knots would come out. It usually hurt if she didn’t and wouldn’t brush it out thoroughly. She had to wet it for a few minutes, to get it wet all the way.
She brushed it out nice and well and kept it straight. Then, she had to blow dry her hair only partially for natural curl. This process, only took about five minute and then she took out her beloved, curler. It only curled it a little because, she hated her hair extremely curl or even considered curly. It was wavy. Before, she had to make her part. This took ten minutes mainly because; her part had to be perfect. Finally she took the curling iron and, placed it in her hair. One by one and carefully, it had to be almost perfect.
She thought everything couldn’t be perfect except her part but, it looked beautiful like always. She had a shirt on already to not screw up her hair but, she was looking around the room to find some pants. Usually, she had to get up but sometimes she could search for a while considering her messy room. Her parents always used to complain about her room but, on her own she didn’t care. After twenty to thirty minutes of making her hair great, she got out her makeup kit. It wasn’t really a kit, just a small box (very small box) containing mascara, three shades of eye shadow, two shades of lipstick and black nail polish. On regular days like today, she put on mascara and eye shadow, a nice scarlet for Gryffindor.
Now, she had to look for her jeans. It was a miracle, she found them in 1:57 seconds, a new record for looking around. They were luckily her favorite jeans that were stone washed and had some wholes. Now, she put her stuff in her special container as she watched other people to come down. “Time to brush my teeth,” she said. Then and finally, she’d go downstairs for a meal because, that tome of day she was absorbing all her energy. “Maybe I wont be so grumpy today,” Sarah thought.
Hi there, I'm Ren, one of the admins here.
Unless you're actually going to use "N/A" as your alias, and seeing as how the roll-call is mandatory, I suggest you come up with an alias.
Also, please only bold the field. It should be "Age: 15" instead of "Age: 15."
Thirdly, "a lot" is not a power. Please pick one from the list.
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| Height & Weight: 5'6 98lbs |
5'6" and 98 is skin and bones.
And finally, your magic words are incorrect.
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