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Title: Taru's Tales
Description: i have too much free time at work


aislinn - March 23, 2008 04:00 PM (GMT)
i've been playing around with stories revolving around one of my characters for some time. most of them aren't suitable for innocent consumption ;) so i haven't posted them here. the majority still need to by typed up, as i do most of my writing at work (toilet paper just isn't rocket science :rolleyes: ) but i've posted a few bits recently http://Writing.Com/authors/woodgnome.

btw, i had tagged the first piece with the keywords UnReal World, UrW, but i omitted them from the naughtier entries - it's not a part of the game and i didn't want to offend anyone here by accident. hope you don't mind, Sami.

please feel free to leave comments if you like (or don't like) what you see.

accent - March 23, 2008 05:16 PM (GMT)
I liked them. You're a good writer with a good imagination. The naughty parts weren't too nasty. Erotica is not easy to write, as you can't just describe what's happening (that would make it just plain porn), you have to give some insight to the feelings of the characters. I think you managed to make those parts enjoyable. One problem I did find though... sometimes the characters felt too primitive, almost neolithic, and not iron age-ish - but that doesn't make the stories bad.

aislinn - March 23, 2008 08:00 PM (GMT)
:wub: thank you :wub:

n9103 - March 24, 2008 07:39 AM (GMT)
they're colorful, to be sure. ;)

#2 is ... well, both priceless and very illustrative of what life for a young lone woman could've been like. personal fantasy of yours?

I'll probably catch the others later, but decided to tackle the big one first, then grabbed the small one, just cause :P

Hope this is the beginning of a long tradition! ^_^




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