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Title: Uchiha Test


Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 12:57 AM (GMT)
Ok, those who want to participate, here's the deal

write out a rp of you using the uchiha bloodline

scenerio: you make up your own scenerio, you have 2 mark sharingan

PM your rp to Saoyaron and Kit

Minimum of 25 lines, maximum of 100

You will be graded on creativity, rp skill, knowledge of the Uchiha bloodline

Hint: use names of Uchiha bloodline moves in your rp

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 01:00 AM (GMT)
After the contest is over, i will post all the rps by each participant with the score given by Kit and I and the reasons

Plz do not argue with the decisions, there will be other chances in the future. I will also give one rating to your char for the losers of this tourny

And there are 2 spots open, so 2 people will win the Uchiha positions

Kit - February 11, 2005 01:00 AM (GMT)
you will be rated out of ten. after a while, we will close this, and we will average the scores. the ones with the highest score will win. of course, this is an unbiased test

snake eyes - February 11, 2005 01:01 AM (GMT)
So whats the max of the Uchiha? and I though this was like the new SA.

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 01:02 AM (GMT)
We will hold contests every month or so...Because Uchiha's are in high demand, we can't have everyone rush to become a uchiha, thus we have to limit the people that can be in them. We need diversity in the forum...other clans are good as well, so you can always join those that are open.

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 01:03 AM (GMT)
To say rougly, For every every 10 or so active members, i suppose we can have one uchiha position.

The reason that Kit and I are uchihas are because of the fact that we had uchihas in the last forum...and that's y we're not taking this test. Kyo and Keitaro likewise if they want to join

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 01:07 AM (GMT)
Oh yeah, one last thing. If you have a character that is already in a bloodline, you may not try out for this position...because even if you get it, u will either have to sacrifice your other character or not become an uchiha..

You are allowed 2 characters, but to have them both as bloodline is not fair, so only one bloodline for one char, and a normal char as your other one

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 01:14 AM (GMT)
Oh yeah, one last thing...lol

the end date for this exam/oppurtunity will be Feb 20th

snake eyes - February 11, 2005 02:37 AM (GMT)
I'm definetly in. :lol: I hope i'm the only one. *whisper whisper*

Zechs - February 11, 2005 03:51 AM (GMT)
bleh, Hyuuga pwns Uchiha any day.... B)

Kit - February 11, 2005 04:15 AM (GMT)
well, even if you are the only one, me and sao will be in it. and we don't grade our own work. poor sao, i'm a harsh grader.. very strict critic. even tho i can't write for beans, i can grade BWAHAHAH so if you can't beat either of us, you dont get it. i think at least. we get to create NPCs... ^^;;;; bwhahaha

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 04:50 AM (GMT)
lol, no no, that's not how it is...We will show our own writings at the end. We will grade our own work. If we win, and the 3rd and 4th place people aren't statisfied, we post it and have a globle vote. And further yet, npcs will not affect the 2 positions open in uchiha..lol

Oni - February 11, 2005 05:42 AM (GMT)
hmm......guess im in too. <_<

Kit - February 11, 2005 06:01 AM (GMT)
w/e you say, sao, but i'm NOT grading my own work, i assure you.

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 06:06 AM (GMT)
ur loss..--;;

Kit - February 11, 2005 06:20 AM (GMT)
HEY, at least i gots no bias.

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 06:28 AM (GMT)
i got no bias either..even if i rate myself --;;

Soushi Raito - February 11, 2005 06:46 AM (GMT)
actually, i changed my mind..i'm gonna make a uchiha npc anyway, i need it for the story, so i'll post my story so u peeps can know what we are expecting from u...this story got a rating of 7.5, we're rating hard..actually, more like kit is..

QUOTE
In the night of a full moon, when the stars glistered in the sky, a boy, walked in the forest of chilling cold, scanning for signs of movement. The boy was running as fast as he could, sounds of footsteps crunching and creaking behind him. Each crunch against the leaves laying on the ground would send shocks of fear and terror into his young mind. Sao, a boy of no extreme talent, unaware of his own abilities, fearing for his own life, ran in a forest of darkness, surrounded by the fear of death. Clutching at the pendent that hung by his neck, he prayed to his father, his mother to keep him safe. His mother had died a few years back, strucken down by a sickness that the doctors could not cure. His father, in rage and disappoint, unleashed a fury that Sao had never seen. Within a day, his father had slaughtered all the doctors in the area for their incompetence and was then excelled as a missing-nin. Sao was given the pendant by his dad before he was taken into custody by his aunt and uncle. It was a farewell gift from his father, and he treasured it deeply. As he grew older, he heard the rumors of his dad becoming an elite missing-nin, rumored to have the strength equal to that of Itachi during his prime. Sao felt warm when he had heard this, and he had made it his mission to forever seek power to one day surpass his father. But right now, the situation was looking grim; he had trespassed in an area that he should not have, and now, the people after him had killing intent in their movements. He was still young, his sharingan still not developed. As he ran through the forest, stumbling every other step, he saw a flashback of his past, a memory of when he was a baby, his mother craddled him in her arms, singing lullabies and putting him to sleep. Then he saw his cousin, only 6 years old, but full of life and vigor. His aunt who was especially nice to him and his uncle who was rude and abnoxious. A spark of warmth came to his chest, and he slowly felt invigorated. He knew it wasn't time for him to give up. It was time to escape, run, flee for help, but he knew, he had to live through this experience. After hours of running, his stamina was running low, each breath was deeper and deeper; his throat was now getting coarse and he could barely run any longer. It seemed the people after him were merely mocking him, waiting for him to reach fatigue. At the end of his stamina, he tripped landing hard on his face and stomach...a streak of blood came flowing down his forehead as he rolled over facing the sky. He was far to exhausted to run any further, the sound of footsteps getting closer and closer. Then it all stopped, 4 shadows hovered over him, as he looked up with fear. The sweat dripped down his face as he looked up, seeing growling faces painted with a assortment of color. They looked like they were about to kill him any second.

Slowly gaining stamina from lying there, he watched carefully, waiting for the sudden movement to jump up and dodge the strike. One of them grinned at the others and said, "Looks like the kid has finally ran out of stamina. Pretty impressive for getting this far eh...hehehe. Now why were you in the hidden village of sand?," the nin asked him with a glare. Sao stammered as he slowly got up but was kicked in the chest and forced down again..."Who said you could get up? Answer the question or die now, " another nin said with a similar ferocity. Knowing that he was at their mercy at the moment, he said teary, "I was just exploring, when i stumbled in that village. Honestly, I didn't mean to." The first nin sneered and scowled and then said, "A likely story, who are you trying to lie to? We're not stupid", he said as he kicked Sao in the stomach. Sao groaned in pain as he rolled over on his side. A nin behind him, grabbed him by the colar of his shirt and picked him up off the ground. The front of the shirt began to choke him as Sao twitched and turned in mid air. Then the nin let him down and Sao gasped for breath. Constantly aware, Sao continued to look for signs of escape, but he couldn't find any. The four nins had him trapped good. I have got to get out of here.

The fourth nin suddenly grapped Sao's hair and pulled his head back. hmmm, you shouldn't lie to your elders, your gonna get yourself real hurt, he said as he lifted Sao into the air by the hair and threw him. Sao screamed with pain as he flew in the air, but managing to regain posture, he twisted, and managed to land on one knee. The word elders had sparked his anger, his rage that flew inside him. He remembered his family, his father, his mother, and his tragic past. The blood of the Uchiha bloodline boiled in his heart as his eyes opened larger and larger. The pupils began to change color as black marks began to appear. He had awakened his bloodline ability, the sharingan. In the midst of battle, from fear, terror, rage, and anger, his 2 mark sharingan sparkled from within and he glared at the 4 nins in front of him with the utmost contempt. Giving a loud scream, he released some anger and he suddenly felt invigorated and ready to fight. He pulled out kunais and ran at the 4 nins, followed by a series of punches and kicks that had been taught to him since child hood. The nins of course saw the anger that was broiling within the young nin, but they acted with grace, blocking and dodging with their own weapons. Jumping into the air, Sao unleashed a Katon Ryuuku No Jutsu at all of them, bigger fireballs than he had ever done in his life. Pulling out his shurikens, he continued the attack with the windmill triple blade attack of the Uchiha Clan; shurikens hidden under each others shadows, hiding from the nins the secret of the art. The fire manipulation training that he had gone through posed to be an additional advantage here, for he wrapped each sharingan into balls of fire and flashed them out at them. The nins though fairly weak took a little damage but was still able to stand. They were royally pissed now, for you could almost see steam coming out of their ears. Sao's stamina was once again almost depleted as he fell to the ground, keeping his balance on one knee.

Where in the world did you pull so much power from....One of the nins commented. He's an uchiha, did you see his sharingan? If we capture him and take him to our boss, we might be able to get much rewards...hehehe., Another nin exclaimed, chuckling to himself. Even with his newly activated sharingan, Sao was at his limit, his eyes began to blur as the night slowly crept into him. His vision getting more and more blurry until he finally blacked out. He fell face first into the mud that was in front of him and was KOed.

He awoke the next day. Opening his eyes, he was at his aunt's house, his cousin, right by his side. huh? where am I? was that a dream?, Sao said aloud. His aunt looked at him, scared, nervous, and curious, We found you in front of our house, with lots of bruises and blood, completely unconscious. What happened?, She asked with concern as well. Sao's head was dizzy, he looked at his little cousin, wanting to tell her all that happened, unsure of what to say to his aunt. Who had saved him? What had he just gone through? What was to happen next? Could he still control the sharingan? But that's a mystery for another day

Fire Manipulation Training, Katon Ryuuku no Jutsu, Windmill Triple Blade, Grand Fireball, Shuriken Fireballs


Kit - February 11, 2005 05:25 PM (GMT)
i'm working on mine, i'm about.. halfway done ^__^ and yes, i'm being mean ^^;;; to everyone, so no worries

Shenkuu Haduken - February 11, 2005 11:37 PM (GMT)
oo cool^^. im going to make an rp right now. meh i knew trying out for the uchiha clan was going to be tough^^ oo well here it goes kit. n ras

snake eyes - February 12, 2005 04:07 AM (GMT)
It seems that only 3 people are doing this shiznit. And how many people can be in Uchiha. Hyuuga has like 5 or 6 and Uchiha only has 2.

Gensou - February 12, 2005 04:17 AM (GMT)
uchiha has 3, well 2 the leader doesn't count. Hyuuga has 4 and 1 leader.

snake eyes - February 12, 2005 04:19 AM (GMT)
I'm not trying to be a smartattic and queston Sao or anything but shouldn't we have 3 contestant winners so Uchiha can have more.

Gensou - February 12, 2005 04:28 AM (GMT)
Sao wants to do only a few at a time. A clan doesn't have to be full. Depending on how well people do, they might not be any new uchihas at this time. it all depends on how people do.

Soushi Raito - February 12, 2005 07:15 AM (GMT)
Keitaro has come back, so he's our 3rd uchiha, he deserves a spot because he used to be uchiha. And then 2 more from this contest will make 5, same as hyuuga

Gensou - February 12, 2005 07:45 AM (GMT)
hyuuga has 4. clan leader doesn't count foo >.<

NaTuRo - February 12, 2005 10:02 AM (GMT)
since uchiha is the only clan that can go over diffirent elements, i think it must be a rare clan with prime players

snake eyes - February 12, 2005 06:21 PM (GMT)
What, have you seen Hyuuga's bloodline limit moves. They have Byajugan, gentle fist, that spinnie move that Neji used and tenkutsus and a whole bunch of other stuff.

Shenkuu Haduken - February 12, 2005 06:29 PM (GMT)
yea but remember there going to have different new abilities from SA....

Gensou - February 12, 2005 06:50 PM (GMT)
yeah Uchiha can copy many more jutsus than other people. but that doesn't really matter. Yes Uchiha will have different abilities, to an extent.

Shenkuu Haduken - February 12, 2005 10:07 PM (GMT)
oo i c. but still there abilities should be alot more strategic and have more effects.

snake eyes - February 12, 2005 10:29 PM (GMT)
What kind of different justus? Will we still have the makengo sharingan?

Shenkuu Haduken - February 12, 2005 10:37 PM (GMT)
of corse...wat would the sharingan be w/o the strongest lvl? duhhh^^

Chaos - February 13, 2005 05:43 PM (GMT)
yup but only a few could use the mange sharingan..like a strong jounin or sennin level since it required a lot of chakra to use it..No one in the clan had reached the mangekyou level on SA (apart Itachi) <.<

Climax - February 13, 2005 05:48 PM (GMT)
Hey If I can be in I would love to ;). So what do you say. Can I take the test?

NaTuRo - February 13, 2005 05:49 PM (GMT)
hahaha, No way!!! And you know why! Your good and you don't need uchiha to be good! Suprise NA again! You can do it! <_<

Climax - February 13, 2005 05:52 PM (GMT)
:o ...ehm....I am don't want to create my own clan. So Either Uchiha or Hyuuga. I am going to talk to Danja about it. So I'll have to see.

But I am at least gonna try out for Uchiha. Or in the worst case I will be forced to create a clan. *sighs loudly* work work work hehe :lol:

NaTuRo - February 13, 2005 05:55 PM (GMT)
do something with the element poison or ice or so...

Climax - February 13, 2005 06:00 PM (GMT)
mmm....intresting indeed

NaTuRo - February 13, 2005 06:00 PM (GMT)
it would be a shame to see you end up in uchiha or hyuuga...




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