((Let's blue this!))


Ghemis rose upward, fading into the arena around him. His expression resembled the dense, rugged ground beneath him. He slowly examined the area, refusing to change his expression the least bit.
He disposed of his jacket, and straightened his spine. The general remained in a relaxed position, as if he had a lackidasical attitude towards and life and death situation. Which, in a sense, that was true.
He waited patiently for his opponent, silent and living within his mind.


He would have to kill to live, and he did plan on living at least one more day..

((i'm using myself from anime world the trunks/jing hybrid.))

Jay walked into the arena with the yellow trencoat on, kir perched on his shulder and the sword strapped to his back.

"so whats the prize for this tournament jay?" kir asked

"i dont know....but i hear its something very valuable, we can add it to our treasure kir" jay replied.

"lets just hope you win first" kir said cockily

"jeez...always the pecimist arent you kir" jay said as he entered the ring. "lets do this" jay said to his opponent.

Ghemnis grinned, "Heh, come on boy. Waste your time and come at me."
He lifted his head, revealing his dull, grey eyes. The broad smile immediatly faded. Sighing, he promptly gave his body a quick shake.
He brought his hands up from his sides..
"Too late."
Bursting foward at an intense speed, Ghemnis approached Jason with a heavy lust for blood.

Jay jumped into the air and kir attached himself to jays wrist and opened his long beak.

"here we go.....GIMME A KIR ROYALE!!!!!!!" jay yelled as he shot several gren blasts at ghemnis. after he fired the shots they hit right behind ghemnis and created a smokescreen throughout the arena. he landed and drew his sword and stood there waiting for the smoke to clear.

Ghemis calmly discovered what had happened. He observed the world of smoke around him, and waved his hands gracefully.
The smoke began to clear, and within it was six copies of Ghemis. One grinned maniacally, in sync with the other six.
The illusion was a simple one, but it had worked well for Ghemis in the past.
All seven Ghemis's charged foward once again.

Jay began to sweat as the 7 ghemis' came rushing towards him.

"jay this dont look good" kir said.

"i know kir....but watch this!" jay yelled as he threw kir out of the ring and threw his jacket off to reveal the black tank top. he slammed the sword into the ground and got into a stance as he began to power up.

~insert ssj3 theme~

his hair began to flare up as both bodily and electrical energy he began to scream bloody murder as the pain from his muscles expanding at such an intense rate started to come down hard on him. his hair went from a blackish color to small gold streaks....then large gold spots....the his whole head of hair turned gold and his eyes changed from the blue color to green. now instead of a blue aura he had a gold one....after his trip into the anime world.....he was the first real world super saiyan.

"come get some" he said simply as he motioned the squad of ghemis' to come at him

The group of Ghemnis copies came fiercly into critical range of Jay, and simply faded out from their positions. Within the next moment, there was no trace of them.
"Looks like I may have under estimated you." The real Ghemnis said from behind the super saiyan Jay. He grinned, and lifted his arms straight towards the cieling of the arena.
"Maybe not."
Flames erupted from newly made cracks in the ground, and the large chunks of the building began to crumble around them. Along with the inferno came serpents up from the ground, circling around Jay.
As the havoc continued, Ghemnis's arms began to glow. Revealing black tatooed marks and unknown lettering. Each mark made into Ghemnis's arm began to shine as well, until his entire arm became one large crimson torch.
"..I made a deal with the devil to recieve these.."
His devilish smirk broadened.
"They are made only for destruction."
Thrusting his entire body foward, he approached Jason's back with his fiery forearms in front of him. The chaos Ghemnis created in the arena continued, creating a living hell around them.

Jay got hit in the back and flew forward screaming in pain. he was on his knees now as he turned back towards ghemis.

"jay!!! are you ok?!" kir yelled as he perched himself on jays shoulder.

"this doesnt look so good kir.......i think i'll need your help" jay said. kir attached himself to jays arm. "take this you devilish bastard
!!!" jay yelled as he charged up kir....but at the same time he charged up his burning attack. "i invented this bakc in anime world........OK, GIMME A KIR ROYALE BURNING ATTACK!!!!" jay screamed as he shot out a massive combined blast from both him and kir at ghemis. this attack would be very hard to dodge....and defelect

Ghemnis did not bother wasting energy to try and dodge the attack, he knew it was too close to him to dodge.
The blast hit him hard in the chest, destructing all of his upper body clothing within an instant. The hair on his body was singed, along with his patches of now slightly darkened skin. He coughed slightly, taking a heavy breath to control the pain.
He wiped the blood that was trickling down his upper arm lazily away.
"It seems I did underestimate you. Though..before you were considered dirt.."
He paused, revealing a toothy grin that was stained with newly given blood.
"Of course, now you are still nothing more then an ant to me."
His tatooed arm began to glow again, but now other markings began to glow, covering his entire upper torso with curvy lines.
A sound similar to burning paper erupted from Ghemnis's skin, and with it was a fierce glow that could blind almost anyone.
"I'm sick of this game!" Ghemnis roared, creating several dozen clones of himself, all of them covered in the same unusual red gleaming marks.
Then, all together, each clone as well as the true Ghemnis began to charge foward, toppling over and smothering around Jay.
The cracking floor beneath them crumbled, and in fell Jay and the many Ghemnis's, dangling through the depths of the rock wildly.

((I probably shouldn't reveal this, but this is like his last attack. I didn't want you to get any wrong ideas. Your blast did a gracious amount of damage externally and internally to Ghemnis, but he is simply good at controlling pain.))

Kir swooped down to jay as he fell.

"JAY ARE YOU OK?!" kir asked. no answer.....
"JAY ANSWER M- ACK!!!" kir screamed as jay grabbed kirs nexk and slammed him on his wrist

"JUST SHUT UP AND BLAST!!!" jay screamed as he flew up avoiding rocks by fireing at them. "you rat bastard destroying the ring!!!" he said as he got close enough and grabbed a rock and began dangaling. his arm sword was coming loose so he took it off and jammed it in kirs mouth and fired it at ghemis just as he lost his grip and began to fell. at this point he was no longer a super saiyan and lost power. as he fell his shirt got caught on a rock and his head smacked against the side and knocked him out.

Ghemnis was unable to dodge the blast, but luckily the blast just missed him by a small amount, burning the skin covering his ribs. The attack drilled into the rocks behind Ghemis, and the chunks surrounded Ghemnis, knocking into him on the way down.
Ghemnis fell farther into the darkness...

Jay awaoke in a daze.....though when he woke up kir was right next to him attached to his arm and he was still a super saiyan. the arena...everything was fine, he couldnt believe it....and ghemis....just stood infront of him.....still damaged by his blast but standing none the less.

"what the hell is going on here......." jay said as he stood. he realized it......it was an illusion....ghemis got in his head and fucked him up. "man its right now that i wish i had shigouri fight instead of me......" jay said as he stood up. his back hurt from the attack that ghemis inflicted upon him. "well......at least his attacks are real....." jay said as he grabbed his normal sword from the ground and stood ready to defend himself. "kir will be out for a few more minutes.....lets me and you talk, man to man" he said as he motioned ghemis to...bring...it....on.

Ghemnis did not grin now, he remained with a malicious expression planted to his face. His burnt arms hung in place at his sides, and although he did not show it, painful gashes bled tardily down his chest.
"You fool."
Ghemnis re-lit his entire upper torso, now feeling an intense burning sensation all throughout his entire body. It seemed that he was causing side effects to erupt.
"Why do you still fight!" His voice became furious and almost hysterical. "You dare to continue against someone with abilites straight from hell itself! Why don't you flee?"
Ghemnis stopped, calming himself down.
"You are a fool." His arms lit to a greater extent. "A kid like you doesn't even deserve to fight me if you couldn't handle at least some of my mind attacks."

"HELL TORCH PALM . . ASSASINATION!"

Firey bolts exploded from his body, crazily shooting up and about randomly. Ghemnis charged foward, one hand farther foward. The front hand flew towards Jason's heart, while the hidden hand approached Jason's neck.
If we wanted to deflect at least one, he would have to sacrifice many layers of skin on his arm...

Jay let it come......cause he had a plan.

"ok, i can only dodge one....." jay said as the hands came at him. as the hand for his heart reached him he took that dodge and sliced at ghemis' arm wiht his sword and jumped in the air. his leg was un succesful though cause ghemis grabbed it and burned it bad. he powered up and treid to get out of his grip. no luck....and the pain was intense. he took the blade and slashed at the other arm hoping to get his leg back.

Ghemnis took the slice to his arm, and tried his best to fight the urge to wince.
It was too close now, he had to continue. Refusing to hesitate, Ghemnis allowed the blade to thrash into his other arm. He continued to burn through Jay's leg, but his blood continued to decinagrate into his arm's torches as it emitted as well.
"Just die you meaningless . . . PEST!"
He swung his other arm up and grabbed Jay's arm, both palms began to burn through Jason's skin finally. He felt the first layers beginning to peel..
"DIE!"
He shot all the energy that remained within him into both arms and out into Jay's arm and leg. The blast became to powerful that it was not just destroying layers of skin but now small chunks of flesh.
Sadly, it only last several seconds, and Ghemnis's Hell Torches abrubtly went out. He stumbled backwards, and began to fade out into unconsiousness.

(Jay, you should have like big bleeding holes in your leg and arm, but Ghemnis has big gashes within each arm and a heavily burnt upper torso, so dont feel cheated. lol.)

Jay collapsed and was sprawling in pain as kir woke up.

"JAY, OH MAN DONT DIE ON ME!" kir said as he held jays head off the ground.

"kir....one last time for this match......cause i'm out after this....attach to me and we'll show the crowd a firework show they'll never forget" ssj jay said. kir did so and opened his huge beak. fearful of ghemis reawakening and killing him....he figured he'd blast him one last time hoping to put him and ghemis out for the rest of the match. as kir charged up jay slammed kirs energy full of his ssj energy and reverted back to his normal state. "here we go...." jay said as kir turned gold with red eyes. "SSJ KIR ROYALE!!!!!!!!!!!!" jay said as he blasted ghemis....one...last....time.....and then everything went black.....

First things first. Nice fight guys. THat was EXTREMELY entertaining. I haven't read a fight that good in a long while. Now onto the judging.


Jay you were very inventive in this fight. I don't know much about Jing, but I know DBZ and you were about as close as I've seen anyone. I was very impressed by your obvious improvement as an RPer and with a little more work I could definitely see you as one of the most dangerous RPers on the site. I'm going to give you a 7 out of 10 for this fight.


Matt, you're writing has developed over time and I'm honestly looking forward to a rematch with you to end what we started on Dragonic so long ago. You've become incredibly talented with your RPing and in this fight you really displayed your skills. GHemnis and his deal with the devil are going to hve their hands full when he faces me, but I look forward to it. I'm giving you a solid 9 for this one man, and you earned it.

*Nods head.* Very nice, guys. Jay I'm glad to see you brought out something a little more original. They way I did this, I started you each with ten points and took one off for different reasons. Don't worry, you didn't suffer much.

Gelfman, you went and used those shadow clones like you always do so I took a point off for that. But you really pulled off some impressive, creative writing after that and I was able to see your character very clearly. You stand with a nine.

Jay I took a point off for going Super-Saiyan, and had you been a little more loose with your writing you would've tied Gelfman. Neverhteless Jay this was one of your best RP sessions ever. Next time I'd suggest more details, really develop. You get eight points.

::Sigh:: My creativity never surpasses shadow clones, lol.