Name: Jerao Kashimere
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Nationality: Republican
Zoid: Shield Liger
AIM: Jerao567
Personality: Jerao, despite his past is a happy person, quite outgoing. He is very wise but doesn't show it often. He's quite stubborn and cocky, often times taking a situation head on without thinking first. He also can be quite clever during his Zoid battles, sometimes thinking up ways to beat bigger stronger foes. He is sensitive, despite his happy nature, often listen to others problems and trying to help. He loves kids. Jerao is afraid, not of failing himself, but others. He loves his brother dearly and couldn't live if his brother died. His mentor also holds a special place in his heart.

Background:
Jerao grew up in a Zoid warrior family on the contient of Delpoi. His father Damon Kashimere won a large tournament and became famous across the contient. Damon was arrogent though, never working, staying out to late, drinking and such. Jerao's mother wasn't a great warrior and couldn't provide food sometimes because of the high demand for Zoid battles. He eventually filed a divorce. After that Felina wasn't fit to do much of anything and was deemed mentaly unstable. She was put in a metal hospital and she is still visited by Jerao to this day.

Jerao then met Roy Yakusa. Roy was a veterin warrior and friend of Damon. Hee agreed to help Jerao and Makteo live for awhile. Jerao was 17, and Makteo was 15. They partial survived this time because of the inheritance, as small as it was, his mother had left them. After working as a mercenary for 3 years and barely making enough to pay for Zoid maintance as well as food, Jerao decided to team up with his younger brother as a Zoid team. They were sucessful for a time.

After a while, they recieved strange messages from an unknown contacter. Soon after, Makteo disappeared, leaving nothing but his Zoid behind. Jerao did some research hand found that this person was known as several different people. His most recent was Krieg. Krieg Nightshade was the owner of a corprate business that dealt with Zoid customizing. Jerao made his way to Nightshade Enterprises headquarters, where he found his brother being questioned by the coroprate tycoon about the wereabouts of the Kashimere families "secret weapon". Jerao thought his absurd. He was supposed to carry on the Championship legacy so he would have been told about any secrets by his mentor, Roy.

He broke into the building, where with the aid of his Shield Liger, freed his brother and barely escaped with their lives. Returing to their hometown, they met up once again with Jerao's mentor, Roy Yakusa. Jerao explained their situation, how they were on the run from the corporate boss Krieg, and how they had no money. Roy took them in and decided to travel with them, to help protect them. The three moved west, amd began to search for clues. While in a large city, Jerao met up with an old psychic, claiming to have known Jerao and Makteo's father. The crazy lady replied, when Jerao asked her about the weapon, that it would reveal itself in time. That gave the Kashimere brothers an idea. With some help from Roy, they again formed a Zoid team. They now fight to possibly attract a bit of the same attentino Jerao's and Makteo's faher got, and reveal the answer.



Appearance: Jerao is about 6 foot 4 inches and weighs about 190 lbs. He has brown eyes that burn with an unmistaken passion. His black hair is think and bushy and falls about neck length. He wears a blue under shirt with a silver lion on it along with a black over coat, leather pants and brown boots and gloves. He has a lean but muscular build. Around his neck is a pendat with an image of his mother.

*cracks her knuckles* Okay, let's get to work shall we?

First off the beginning about his 'zoid warrior' family is rather off. Zoid battling on this site is considered a hobby, a game, a dangerous game to say the least but that's besides the point. Battles, whether it was win or lose, don't provide much of a living. From what I remember, almost every character on this site has a real job of sorts. They also have a life outside of zoids. This fact alone throws off your entire biography and chucks it in the garbage. How did these guys support themselves? Where did they live? What do these guys do OUTSIDE of the world of Zoid battling?

Hell how did he get the Shield Liger? I don't think you've ever mentioned HOW he got one? Let alone where he got the money to purchase the feline war machine. And when exactly did he get a Zoid License? At age 16 you can be in a zoid when accompanied by an instructor of sorts. Age 18 is when they get their official license.

Oh and you know something's wrong when the word 'zoids' appears in every paragraph and is centered around that word. Give this person a life outside of that world.