Character Name: Juno Rasca
Nickname: Jiro
Email: zaneroddy2000@yahoo.com
Warrior Type: Free Lance
Char Sex: Male
Char Age: 19
Zoids: Crystal Saurer, Storm Sworder
AIM Contact: zanon54321
Appearance: Juno is young looking and has a happy face to him. He is 5’3” with pale skin and he is skinny. He has white hair that comes down to his ice blue eyes. He wears goggles, a green sweater with some kind of logo on it, ripped tight blue jeans, odd boots, and a towel with the same logo on his shirt as a cape.
Personality: Juno is crazy and believes he is a super hero but he has an I.Q. of 196, which is pure genius. He is cheer full and has fun playing with his zoids. He enjoys fixing and repairing his zoids whenever he can. He may seem out of whack but when he gets into the cockpit of a zoid he gets serious.
History: Juno was an orphan never to know of his parents. He grew up in a junkyard and worked on zoids his whole life. When he met his first zoid his Crystal Saurer his life changed. He formed a bond with his zoid it was like his father. He would sit and talk with it.
One day he saw a woman being attacked and tried to help her. He got beat up. Then he cried out for his zoid it came and he climbed in it for the first time he hunted down the thugs and annihilated them .He decided that must never happen again. He decided to become a hero for justice. That’s when he started piloting his zoid and trained to become a fighter.
Wandering the land. Protecting inocense. Keeping the world safe it was all in a days work for him. He almost became bored then one day he saw a flyer for a zoids tournament…

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We're NOT Metal Machine Music, we're Metal Combat. Two different sites. Which means we have a variety of differences. Do NOT take us for a simple carbon copy. I'm also offended at the fact that you obviously did not take the time to look around because you would've noticed this. And that happens to be our character format. You also did not bother to look at the other accepted bios on the site. If you had you might have noticed that there's a bit of consistancy with format, skill, and overall effort. Your bio shows none of the three. Now let's get away from the outer skin right there and go to the actual content of the said character bio..

Everything in this biography is out right wrong. For one thing, there is no such thing as a Crystal Saurer here on MC:CAN. And ironically the Storm Sworder just so happens to be on this site.. But it's unobtainable in the beginning. Plus there's only one zoid per character. You want another zoid? Make another character. Presuming of course you get passed me.

Now let's look at Solaris' quote and think for a second. This person is an orphan. Even if he were to get a job somehow by bypassing the child labor laws, do you really think he'd be able to have enough money to buy a zoid when he probably barely has enough money to support himself? Which leads to another question- if he was an Orphan, how'd he survive? All you state after that one sentence labeling him as an Orphan is that he grew up on a Junkyard. Not only was that vague but it made no sense whatsoever. How'd he get food? Water? Where did he shelter? Hell I'm pretty damned sure that the Junkyard had people working in it and they would've found him and sent him to some sort of Orphanage.

Another thing is that you've never once explained HOW he lost his parents. It was just mentioned once and dropped like a hot potatoe and left on the ground with no one to clean up after it. Actually a lot of the bio is like that- a simple statement without something to back it up.

The biography isn't much actually. In fact it reminds me a lot of an Anime character.. Like Excel from Excel Saga or even BoBoBo (which I've only seen five minutes of but your character STILL reminds me of it). Meaning it really doesn't make sense. We like the characters realistic like, but everytime I imagine your character I imagine.. An Anime character.

Last I checked, Zoids don't act on their own unless they were sentient, and there's only one zoid on this site that's been accepted as such. Meaning that there's no way he could just call and his zoid would come in and go on a rampage on his command.

I'd reccomend just dropping everything, and write a new bio and put some effort in it. Look around the site and get some ideas as to what you should write. Because from what I see here, it's going to be hard as hell to build on what you have. So yes, read the following links and also look around the board for other things. Get some idea as to what we're looking for before trying to post something in this section.

Solaris' Character Creation Guide
Board Rules