Hey, Taru! No knocking yourself about, now, you talented soul. :-) I enjoyed both your pieces. :-) "It's Lost" captures House's 'vibe.' It reminds me of the Blue Rodeo lyrics: "And if we're lost/Then we are lost together" in their song "Lost Together." Lyrics: http://www.bluerodeo.com/br/losttogether.html :-)

And "Empty" has a haunting quality. I think most folks who have gone through their 'teenage angst years' (or just general 'human angst' LOL) can relate. {{{{Taru}}}}

It's a pleasure to meet someone who enjoys both the Arts and Sciences, as I do, too. :-) As my 'profile' suggests, I'm interested in virtually *everything* and count particle physics, theoretical physics and cosmology among my 'hobbies.' LOL

Keep writing, and keep looking up at the stars... They're doing some mighty interesting things, up there. LOL

Hugs,
Sanlin :-)

Thanks...I guess it's that whole thing about not liking your own work.

Oh just thought I'd toss this at you, do you think I should include an Original Works area on this board...I know some other people write original poetry, and I have a few songs that I have written...just an idea...maybe I'll go make a poll...

Your poems are really good. I hope you will post some more soon. Kuddos!

PPD :D

Thanks! Glad you liked it...I'm currently working on a fan fic, but when I am happy with it then I will try to see if I can convince my brain to think like House again! LOL!

wow those are excellent! If you mix and match part of some of the poems together they would make fantastic lyrics. My favorite lines from Bound, "I need to teach, but have not learned I need to guide, but am blind as well"

Thankies...I have written a few songs, but I'm not so good with the whole music part of songs...lol...I do play piano and clairnet, but I'm not good without my trusty sheet music...lol