Oooooo! I like it! You are very good at painting a picture with words. I can picture the whole thing in my head.

Are you going where I'm going in Tide of Time?! :huh: Great minds think alike!!! Now I've got to hurry up and finish so people don't think I stole your idea ;) :lol:

I hope you'll continue.

I really like the visuals also--you painted a very vivid picture of House's journey to the bar--Now I'm dying to know what happens next! The writers for the show should pop over to the site sometime; I think they'd get some really good ideas about where to go with the show.

Please, please, you gotta do more ont his one. I keep checking back to see if you'd add anything and I printed this one off twice (uh, lost the first copy). I love it and I'm DYING TO KNOW what is happening at the bar. So, will you please write more? Please?

Genagirl - you're very sweet - thank you! Yes, I've been writhing around about this story, and in fact, I think my anti-productiveness comes from being a bit too affected by books I've been reading lately, books that play with shifts in time and such. So I was angling a bit in that direction, but now, having read about 1/4 of Betz's new (and very good) fic, I'm probably not going to be time traveling and will just bloody well get on with the story. I.e, when someone else does it so well there's no need to call "do overs!" eh? :D

Thanks again and I'll make sure House gets to that bar come hell or high-ball!

Cheers n' Wooster,

-Pradon