Ok, what all do you need me to do Dragoon and how do you want to go about this?

This is up to you, tailor made training bub. That means if you have certain aspects you wanna improve, such as combat posts, dialogue between characters, that sort of thing, ask away and we'll get started :beers:

Alrighty then. i guess for now i'd like to work on my combat skills. whenever i do an action post i feel that its incomplete some how.

Okay, write up a typical combat post and we'll work from there.

It was well past midnight on a cloudless moon light night. Dressed in his norma black jeans, green t-shirrt, and black long coat Drake walked through the decent sized park on his way back to his apartment after a night on the town.

a Slight breeze wove it's way through the trees bring with it a strange sent.

Drake stopped in mid stride, gave the area the once over and called out:

"Who's there!"

Gah *smacks about with eggnog carton* I wanted a combat post, but this can be used to my advantage, you shall play both sides of this, you'll fight yourself, so continue on.

OOC: OH COME ON! dude throw me a bone or something. fighting my self is kind of pointless

OOC: Nope, this way I get to see how you deal with opponents and the like without being biased against the other person you'd be fighting. Take one character you have and pit it against another one of yours and then we're in business. I know it sounds a little left field-ish, but it will really help me figure out what to work on with you, so buck up princess!!

OOC: smacks dragoon with a hammer. who you calling princess.
i was hoping to make some head way tonight but it doesn't look like that gonna happen. on the spot thinking (for RPG's) is not something i'm good at. i'll have to think on this little twist of fate.

OOC: *Bites off the offending arm and smacks him upside the head with it* That's fine, we'll work on that too. So take your time and figure something out, we can pick this up when ever you're ready.

great.... with my current interest renewed in the kamen rider series this will most likely be the cheesest thing i ever do on thes board.

Cheese is KEY!!!

lol, why do i think this is gonna come back and bite me on the ass big time. fine dragoon you win...as per the norm. but whatever happens here stays here.

Sounds good, so start planning, whether that means scribbling ideas down on the computer or paper or speaking out loud, whatever works for ya, DO IT!! Try and turn your head into a movie screen and play it out in your minds eye then transfer that into words in your post :beers:

dragoon it's the transfer to paper that I have trouble with. everything works out fine in my head but when i try and write it down it goes to shit.

Then REWRITE REWRITE and after that, REWRITE again. Work through it slowly, if you need a dictonary or Thesaurus, then use them! No shame in it at all. Take it frame by frame if you will.

tend to lose interest after the frist draft. thats why i like the rpgs they change and have somthing new to work off of.

First drafts are good, but going through it a few times is definately a lot of help.

well i'm still working on the charactors so i haven't lost interest ust yet.

So help me if you do lose interest...

god help you??? If i lose interest i'm the one thats gonna need gods help not you.

anyway, i'm still surprised that you thought my chimera idea was good.

Less banter and more production :wolfy:

OOC: I hope I'm not interfering but it looks like nothings going on. And I was wondering If I could fight him and help out. since i'm....studying I guess under Kiaser. I would like to help.

i don't mind. i was gonna reset the opening anyway to fit the self battle.

i'll just post the self battle else where.

Well, that works for me, Tekky can battle Fang and he can PM me his self battle so I can see what I have to work with there, sweet monkey jesus, what a brilliant idea!!

Yes, I did say sweet monkey jesus :beers:

O_o?? you just sweet monkey'd your self? oh well and i was gonna post the self battle on the board, but if you wanted it PM'd i can work that too.

OOC:
So we fighting Here?

Behold the power of Cheese!

<gets fwapped by countless incoming weasels>

yes blood fang we fight here. blood did you have a point to make?

Tekky, how long have you known me, and you STILL ask if I have a point in my posts? :lol:

Accually.. I sorta DO have a point. I wanna play. Coach X is getting all lonely and stuff.. And Bloodfang needs to experiance first hand the crazy side of the rpgs, so that way he won't run off of screaming when it happens in a serious rpg.

>_> Wait.. you WERE talking to me, right? As there are two people on the board who could be called "Blood" for short..

We can just call the new guy Fang, that would work.

*Shakes his head*

Okay first of all, maybe you should ask Fang if he wants to battle your Coach X, second, I've been calling him Fang for a while now <_<

yes blood "storm" I was taking to you

and i don't know about the whole coach x deal. he's a little high powered if you know what I mean. oh blood "fang" the power level i'll set for the fight is 10 men, also your board nick nme should you chose to accecpt it....not that you can (and if the higher ups don't give you an another one) will be fang sense blood is taken.

OOC: It's all fine I prefer Fang to blood anyways. And I have no problem with Coach X. Now lets get CRAZY!!! :loopy: I'll let you set the stage then go fotm there. :wolfy: :bang:

OOC: theres the set up.

IC:

Fang strolled out of the darkness, his rags of clothes flutter around him, a sorwd hangs by a strap on his side. "Freashly back from the dead and I already found a hit." Fang steps foreward, "This is gonna be fun."

OOC:

Cool huh. He's back form being killed by Kaiser but has no connection to his guyver unit. Unless you want to up the anity, Tek.

Drake gave the stanger a solid look before looking him over.

"Freshly back and a new hit he says, a Sword tied to his hips to boot."

Drake gave a humored laugh before turning on his heel and walking away.

"Sorry, but I don't have time to play highlander kid. Besides it's late shouldn't you be running home to mommy?" was Dakes parting shot. *Heh, kids these days. Their just getting weirder and.....*

Dakes thoughts were cut short as every alarm bell went off in his head. Dake ducked into a low forward bow as he cought the glint of moonlight on metal out of the cornor of his eyes. He could feel the air parting as the blade passed with-in scant miliameters of his back.

Dake snaped back up and throw his right out blocking the second swing with a black metal bracelet. Upon impact the red jem embeded int he bracelet began to pluse with a bright light.


"kid, I don't think you fully understand who your dealing with."

Fang pressed harder makeing his feet dig into the ground, pushing Drake back. "I don't give a damn!" Fang swept his sorwd and jumped back, landing on th balls of his feet holding the sword in a high cross graud. "Lets rock and roll."

OOC: sorry for taking so long but work is kicking my ass. fang, can you ost up a DF on your guy. i should have mine up soon

OOC:
His guyver data file is in Bloodfangs intro post. But without it he's just your everyday semi-master sowrdsman. With an anger problem.

OOC: After all this we're going to do a quick tutorial on data file setup :war: