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Title: Prelude to terror
Description: THIS IS GONNA MAKE YOU THINK...WTF?


khyto - August 14, 2005 02:51 PM (GMT)
OOC:OK THIS IS A TECHNIQLY THE FIRST CHAPTER ,INTROS OVER AND ALL BUT THIS IS JUST A SOMETHING EXTRA THAT IM PUTTING IN ,INBETWEEN THE INTRO AND CHAPTER ONE ,IV ALREADY WRITTEN CHAPTER ONE AND THORT THIS WAS NESSESSARY ,BASICLY WHEN I HAD PEOPLE READ CHAPTER ONE THEY DIDNT GET WHAT WAS TAKING PLACE ,TO ME THATS ACTUALLY GOOD ,BUT THIS IS JUST A LITTLE GAP THAT CONNECTS THINGS ,HOPEFULLY IL HAVE CHAPTERS ONE AND TWO SOMETIME NEXT WEEK.

The door to the room shuts.
He wakes up, covered in blood
He smells the air and vomits
The smell is something more disgusting than anything he remembers smelling
And yet…somewhat, familiar
He flicks the light switch,
On, off
On, off
Nothing …..No light
All the lights in the house are busted…
Sometimes the mind sees and realises things better in the darkness

He rips the tattered black curtains down
A ray of moonlight cuts through the darkness
In the room, what was once the faces of two older people are moonlit?
They are dead, he has killed them

‘He’ not as in the mans body, soul or spirit,
‘He’ as in the thing that now plagues his existence
The violator
The devastator
The wrath of the dead
A demonic spirit

He looks up to the middle of the room
There is something there he thinks to himself
Something moving…
Where am I?
What is this place?
He looks up again at the moving object that seems to be spinning
It is pitch black
He hears a number of clicks from the object….
Then dead silence….
He continues to look, not moving his head.
Again, more clicks come from the object,
It stays in one place…waiting for him to make a move.

A few flickers of moisture spin off the object and his him in the face
He begins feeling his way around, his hand lands in something wet and cold
, to thick to be water, to thin to be mud
, in his horror
He not realises he is in a place of murder
The shock paralysing him
His heart begins beating ever so faster
Before he realises it, he’s sweating all over
Drops of sweat start to run down his nose and drop off when they hit the point
Sweat trickles down and curves around near his eyes,
His fists, clenched
He begins to shake
His chest, burning
All he can hear is his heart beat pounding strongly in the back of his skull
It becomes louder, like a subwoofer
A constant base, it becomes so fast it’s almost a drown
He becomes light headed and feels like he can’t breathe
The back of his neck is strongly throbbing
He touches it,
Two lumps,
Pulsing in sync with each other
Then it slowly begins to fade away,
His heart rate returns to normal
The two lumps stop throbbing and disappear
He regains control of himself and continues searching the ground with his trembling hands

He touches something solid, it is cold it feels metallic

He believes it is a torch

He hits the button

Nothing…

He hits it again

Nothing…

He grabs the torch and hurls it into the darkness

A blast of light and sound hit him at once

“Witnesses say that the school kids were killed by what the described, as a power ranger like villain, more on that story later tonight, next, more Elvis sightings.”

He looks up… the spinning thing is a fan, the fan is splattered with blood,
He sits in shock,
Unable to move,
His heart rate increases,
For a few moments he cannot say a word, he can only listen…

“yep well I saw a man in what looked like a big crab costume ,but when he turned around , I saw it ,it was Elvis ,I knew it ,I screamed out the king is back! ,he told me to be quiet and gave me $200 dollars “

“Is it possible sir, if you were to hand that in so we could check it for Elvis’s finger prints?”

“Um well no, I’m sorry this is a collectors item, and well uh gosh um god knows what people would do to get here hands on it, I just don’t trust people with my Elvis money!!!”

He felt like a rabbit, trapped in a cage….

He looked around him,
The sight and smell of the dead turned his stomach

Good god where am I?

Your home, echoes back a voice in the darkness

He quickly turns around, who’s there, please don’t kill me, oh god no! This is it!

Remember? Echoes a voice in the darkness

Remember what?

I’m your partner, we killed them together! Echoes a voice in the darkness

What no! That’s impossible, id never kill anyone! I remember nothing about killing people you liar!

The mind chooses to remember what it wants; it’s a symptom of a large amount of shock, Echoes a voice in the darkness

What do you know! , who are you! , where are you?

I wish I could come out and meet you face to face, but I cant, I’m here, in you, a part of you! Echoes a voice in the darkness

What? No way, this is bull crap what are you?????

Here let me show you everything you have forgotten! Echoes a voice in the darkness

In a second everything that had happened the last 3 days boomed into his head! His head jolted back into a cupboard, his head begins to shake, blood trickles down his nose, his eyes lids slap open, and his eyes are bloodshot

Oh …oh my god! WHAT HAVE I DONE!!!!!! NOOOOO THERE LIVES MY FRIENDS AHHHHH YOUUU TOOOOK THEM!!! YOU BASTERD!!!!

WE took them, although id love to, I don’t want to take all the credit for it, Echoes a voice in the darkness

I don’t believe it, this is a dream, and I’ll wake up soon! This is all just a horrible nightmare, yeah that’s it.

He looks over at the door ,a small crack of light beams through ,and I bet behind that door ,my friends are there and there all laughing cuz this is all just a joke …yeah this can all be explained.

Hmmm….denial, Echoes a voice in the darkness

He stumbles to his feet and runs for the door; he turns the nob…..
It stopes half way

LOCKED!

Where’s the key you basted! Gimmie the key!

NO, YOU’RE LOCKED IN HERE FOR GOOD!!!




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