The following are the powers for my void hounds. At this point in time I don't know if I'll use them in any up coming RPG or in the fiction I'm trying to write. Right now I'm just looking for feed back of any kind. Thank you for taking the time to read through this.


Looks:
Wolf style draconic stlye body with dark, shiny serpent scales. The head has a set of horns that go from the jaw up and around the ears and the eyes are

Powers:

1. Two blades on each shoulder sweeping backward. one on top of the shoulder and the other one on the side with another blade set right behind the shoulder blades. The spikes are forward facing so that they can be used as lances.

2. A small paper thin layer of crystal cover the void hounds thick hide. this layer can absorb large amounts of energy which is then transferred and stored in a special crystalline sac inside the mouth..

3. Diamond hard claws.

4. Speed: 0-200 mph, reflex speed 10-30x human.

5. Short- range teleportation: A type of sight to sight teleportation with a range of only 200 yards gives these beasts of the hunt the edge they need when running down faster prey.

6. The void hounds senses are only 5x that of a normal wolf and their intelligence is nearly on par with that of a human being.

Note: It should be noted that void hounds are rarely seen alone as they perfer to hunt in packs of 5.

Now are these things wolf looking or dragon looking or wolf like dragons or dragon like wolves??

Are these horns starting at the side of the jawline and curling up and forward so that they don't interfere with eating and seeing?

There seems to be some confusion with the blade system on the shoulders. You've got blades going backwards and forwards at the same time? Are the spikes different from the blades?

What happens if these special engery sacs are impaled or damaged in some way?

So what if the claws are hard like diamonds :P You have to put it in context Tekky :P

So anything special about this limited line of sight teleportation, can they do it rapidly, does it take time to teleport, can they take anything with them while they teleport? Those kinds of questions.

So they're sentient but weak minded, are they easily confused and capable of being outsmartted then :D

*does fish impression for a few seconds*

gah, looks like it's back to the drawing board design wise.

gonna rework this point down to four blades total. one on the side of each shoulder and then two on the back. these blades are facing forward so that they can be used to ram prey. the ones on the shoulder sweep backwards.

nothing really. if their storing energy then the energy will bleed off and they won't be able to use that power until the sac's heal. if the sac's are active then they'll blow up taking the head with them.

being diamond hard means they can cut through most matertial.

no nothing special about it. they can due it as many times as they need with in the range given and no they can't take anything with them.

their smart enough to learn from their mistakes and they can use group tatics, both planed and on the fly.

*Repeatedly stomps on Tekno's head*

This is the kind of stuff you include in data files :bang:

well sometimes i don't think of these things tell people call me on them. that my friend is why i post these thing for feed back. that way i get called on things that i miss.