OOC: Well ladies and Germs, Madams and Monsuries the battle between Apocalypse and Maverick has finally begun so put your kids to bed and hold on to your seats cause things are about to get violent.

IC: Standing in the middle of a Deselect waste land that used to be earth. Apocalypse surveys his once Glories home world when he scences the arrival of another. Not wanting to give it the chance to prepare Apocalypse lunges for the mysterious being driving his knee right into the beings mid section before delivering a powerful round house kick to the side of it's head sending the stranger flying into the remains of a building

OOC: Sigh.. this is what I was afraid would happen. The "Coaches" did nothing more than slap around the new guys, so in essance they learned very little.
The starting post alone makes me cringe.
1. It's too short. It lacks any sort of substance. Make it longer, give it more details, try and make it feel like it's alive.
2. Geez, Calm the heck down, Give Maverick a chance to post his own opening post before you start whailing on his ass.
3. Rpg's aren't just big fights.. I know the coaches didn't even TRY to touch on that Aspect of rpgs. Violence is fun, yes.. but try talking out your issues before things egenerate into a slugfest.

OOC:
Not a problem blood. If Apocalypse wants to get straight to the action then I'll have to build a story around him (and then bend it to my will Mwahahahahahahahahah).

IC:
John Scrabbles around in the dirt rubbing his chin as he sneers at his attacker.
Looking around at his surroundings John sees a vast open desert with an aray of semi destroyed military facilities. Gun smoke was fresh in the air and the sun was just beggining to set over the cliff ridden back drop that surrounded them. His rib cage was all but shattered and he whezzed heavily as he picked himslef up from the coener of the half crumbled wall.

"You want a fight Apocalypse... I'll gi... *cough* give you a fight"

John rose steadily to his feet and ran towards the guyver that stood before him as he yelled out the familar word.

"GUYVER!"

John's body suspended inches away from apocalypse as the blast field surrounded him and his gleaming purple armour latched to his body via hundreds of blue tendrils. The field sent the unaware Apocalypse flying back and skidding across the desert floor tearing up the ground beneath him as he landed.

Maverick stood poised at a safe distance weighing up his situation.
He'd seen this self proclaimed 'destroyer of worlds' fight before and it didn't look good for the obvious under dog of this potential fight.
He scanned the terrain for a possible escape but the endless view of mountains and vast desert filled him with a sense of dread as his foe rose to his feet smirking arrogantly.
John knew that even as Maverick it'd be near impossible to defeat such an overwhelming foe, he'd sensed a strong power long before the vortex that had bought him here had opened up and dumped him off here but now, in the heat of the sun, this aura before him seemed immense even with Johns Martial arts training.

OOC: Power without perception...

OOC:Nice come back Mav

IC: Picking himself up off of the Desert floor Apocalypse “I was wondering when you’d show your self Maverick” Walking toward Maverick Apocalypse shouted “It didn’t have to be this way Maverick, we were friends once allies we can be again.”
“I’ll never join you Apocalypse”
“Pity”
With that he lunged at Maverick and was about to punch him when to his Surprise Maverick caught his hand and throw him into one of the derelict buildings that was surrounding them.

Apocalypse went crashing into an old long abandoned office block. The force of the impact caused to entire building to come crumbling down on top of Apocalypse.

Getting up out of the rubble Apocalypse again lunged at Maverick only this time he teleported right behind him and delivered a powerful left hook. Before Maverick had the to react he was sent skidding along the desert floor and into the Rubble the Apocalypse had just arisen from moments earlier.

As Maverick started to get up Apocalypse shouted over to him “ If you think I’m strong now you should see me when I’m using 100% of my power.”

"This is your Last chance Maverick join me or be destroyed"

OOC: Guys.. Why the heck are you fighting when your still in training?

I'm going to lock this topic up untill I'm satisfied your coaches have done some accuall coaching.