Here's chapter 1 of a new story I'm writing, I'm going to put my old idea for the 3d manga on hold and try to adapt this story to my 3d manga instead. Anyway I normally don't put up what I consider to be an intermediate phaze of a really important project out in the open like this, but considering some people were brave enough to come out of the closet around here I guess I shouldn't hesitate to show this. Anyway if you think any of the characterizations are done unrealistically, remember this is inspired by the real things, I'm just telling it how it is , even if its done in an extremely bizarre and abstract sort of way.

http://www.geocities.com/defectron/Holepunch1.htm

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Wow..

You seem to have a strange obession with People wearing paperplate masks throwing liscence plates at people.

Unless of course, that's you the you from Battlecube again.. but somehow your a doppleganger or something..

No no this is an entirely differnt story, sometime I'll have to finish that battlecube thing in SFCW that explains the paper plate mask in that continuity as well. But yeah I have a history with paper plate masks (I use them to scare drug junkies) so I've kind of made it a tradition of having a character who wears a paper plate mask in all of my stories. Also it symbolizes how Kiri has some hidden aspects about her character.

As for the liscense plate, part of the reason I'm using it here is because it symbolizes a certain concept in an abstract sort of way that will be cleared up a bit more in the next chapter(I'm going to be like Zero and not explain what it is though). Also I like throwing liscense plates at things, so of course there's going to be someone who does that in a story thats more or less about me.

Kirstie says you got the Lord of Terror all wrong.. according to her, you didn't have it "pink and fluffy" enough.

I know I'LD be terrorised of a giant pink fluffy thingie like that..

Uhhh...maybe he's pink and fluffy under all that green glowyness surrounding his body...

Kirstie doesn't beleave you.. She says your lieing...

It's obviously BLUE under the green glowy bits.

* Has no Idea what the hell they're talking about. So he grabs a bag of twizlers and starts eating."

Nice story Mr.Z. Very nice, but that girl on the bus seemed very violent. :blink:

That she was, wasn't she? Unfortunatly that type of character isn't unrealistic in the real world. As they said in the mad pierrot episode of cowboy bebop. "Nothings as pure and cruel as a child" which is something I know to be quite true.


Anyway, in the past few days I modelled most of the monster that Zero rips the spine out of in the begining of the story. I probably wont finish it until I get back from anime central. I also got another program called poser 6 to speed up production of the 3d manga. Basically poser is a character development and animation program. I only use it to make unimportant human characters though because it tends to be less reliable when it comes to specialized details. Between that and Zbrush, I should be able to get things done much more efficientlyhere, that way I can focus more on putting details into important characters.