http://www.geocities.com/defectron/Hebi.htm


Well it's finnally happened I decided to take a stab at the magical girl genre! But be warned, Hebiko is NOT your typical magical girl, she's magical, and she's a girl but.... well she's not very typical. I've been working on a 3d model of Hebiko as well, I'm considering making a 3d manga of the Hebiko series which I've started to write. I'll be posting further chapters of it as i write it.

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dude your web page has errors. Other then that, cool story

It worked fine when I loaded it, what sort of errors did you get?

syntax i think its a program error

...Interesting...strange...nonsense...funny...

I like

One Q tho. Is W your favorite letter?

No the deal with me changing the country names, most noticibly Wapan was an idea I got one time when I was listening to this one fansubber rant about how this person was flaming her for her interest in a certain series and saying that she didn't know japanese. So the guy started to call her "Wapanese girl" in the e-mails he sent her. So I thought "Hey, Wapan sounds kind of cool, I gotta incorporate that into this somehow"

So that's how the nation of Wapan was born, all the other countrys got their names changed around in some way as well to make everything flow better.

EDIT: Damn it, someone needs to fix this so that unregistered people can't just waltz in and post, this is Mr Z for those who don't know :lol:

I didn't know guest could post... if thats the case I will never log in again...

Fixed the settings,this was the only one that actually allowed guest posting but not anymore. Happy now Mr Z? And why couldn't you go and fix it? There's a reason you have admin powers :P

I actually forgot about this, at the time I didnt know how to fix that sort of thing because the admin panel is pretty funky so it took me awhile to figure it all out. I tried posting somewhere else without logging in and it didnt work so I assumed it got fixed. How do you fix settings for indevidual posts anyway?

In the admin CP you just scroll down till you see manage forums,then click permissions for the appropriate forum,tada!

Hurray, another mystery solved! By the way Ch. 6 of this story should be up some time during break, I havent had alot of time to work on it , but it'll be up soon enough.

Oddly enough.. I've only just begun reading this.. but it's drop dead funny as hell.

I bet Hebiko and Kirstie would make pretty good friends.. that would be all kinds of awesome. :lol:

Yeah I could definatly see that happening. By the way, the version of Mr Z from battle cube makes a cameo appearance in CH.6

IF he doesn't end up dieing in my final post...
Which by the way, Sparky and kaiser have untill tomarrow morning to post thier last rites before I shut it down personally.

I would like to see Kirstie come in and mess around for a little while.. it could be fun.

Oh I have an idea about how Mr Z will be able to escape, but I was going to wait for kaiser and sparky to post first.

EDIT: Later on in the story the deal about what was going on with Chaos Dust will also be explained since it looks like there wont be enought ime to explain it in the rpg.

too bad I posted that I was only allowing you guys one post each to finish things off. :lol:

Curse you and your one post ways, well I'll just have to edit the rest of what I was planning into my post, it'll make things inconvenient for sparky and kaiser but I guess theyll just have to deal with it. :lol:

EDIT: Ok I edited it in you guys can post your replys now.

Making things difficult for me bub *cracks knuckles* that's just prime :beers:

<looks around in a conspiritable way>

Must.. draw.. Hebiko..

I'l draw her and Kirstie having a tea party! :lol: