Title: "Pursuit of Happiness"
Description: An Ode, By Rocket Fingers
Rocket Fingers - April 13, 2008 03:19 AM (GMT)
Pursuit of Happiness
Though I may pursue you
You're difficult to find
I can look here, there
But you're nowhere in sight
A whisper in the wind
Sunshine on your face
The comfort of night, maybe
Being alone with yourself
There are hints to you
Not enough to let show
To where you truly could be
I may never find you
Yet when I need you the most
You're always right there
Of course a great feeling
That we all can relate to
It may be getting an A
Or speding time with a friend
Finding a new joy
Maybe getting a new pet
Now I see clearly
You're always right there
It's just that I can't find you
Like you come to find me
Happiness is always there
It isn't something you can find
It comes to you, not you to it
And it comes to everyone one day
The End
What do you think? :unsure:
Alphonse - April 13, 2008 03:24 AM (GMT)
In my opinion, it's great. Where did the inspiration come from?
Rocket Fingers - April 13, 2008 03:25 AM (GMT)
Happiness.
I like writing poetry, and I was in a good mood.
SilverBlade - April 13, 2008 03:27 AM (GMT)
Meh. I don't really have an 'eye' for poetry. I like ones that rhyme though..XD I have to memorize an 176 word poem for english by thurs...havnt even started yet T_T
but that was pretty deep. :nod:
Rocket Fingers - April 13, 2008 03:29 AM (GMT)
Gee thanks Will, you made me feel so special.
I have a funny poem that rhymes too. I'll post it in a little bit.
Hyorinmaru - April 13, 2008 04:10 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (SilverBlade @ Apr 13 2008, 03:27 AM) |
Meh. I don't really have an 'eye' for poetry. I like ones that rhyme though..XD I have to memorize an 176 word poem for english by thurs...havnt even started yet T_T
but that was pretty deep. :nod: |
Mine's 203 words, Will. So don't be crying when I haven't started yet either, and mine is about 30 words longer. >,<
Rocket Fingers - April 13, 2008 05:54 PM (GMT)
Gee Mark, thanks for commenting on my ode, really.
Xugoh - April 13, 2008 06:02 PM (GMT)
These guys have no respect for the soul of a true poet. Don't mind them. You only need the fire burning in your heart to push forward toward a more glorious tomorrow! T__T
Hyorinmaru - April 13, 2008 06:05 PM (GMT)
My bad, Taylor. It's really good. I like it.
Now, gotta go practice mah poem. >.>
Rocket Fingers - April 13, 2008 06:12 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Xugoh @ Apr 13 2008, 10:02 AM) |
| These guys have no respect for the soul of a true poet. Don't mind them. You only need the fire burning in your heart to push forward toward a more glorious tomorrow! T__T |
Amen?
Hyorinmaru - April 13, 2008 06:22 PM (GMT)
You think that's something, Taylor? Look in my FC. He's said much worse. XD
Rocket Fingers - April 16, 2008 01:02 AM (GMT)
Get. The ****. Off. NO WAI.
Hyorinmaru - April 17, 2008 12:48 AM (GMT)
YA WAI LOLZ.
sooo......i herd a lil sumthin'......
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tht u liek mudkipz
Rocket Fingers - April 17, 2008 02:05 AM (GMT)