DROWNING BEE.

She smothers her love,
With her only hate,
Inconsistancies flowing,
At unbelieveable rates.

She watches coldly,
A drowning bee,
No vision to conquor,
No vision to fear.

No help does she offer,
Just watches in horror,
As this poor creature,
Fails to exist.

Survival is tough,
And she finds herself trapped,
For now she is the bee,
In the ocean of fear.

But her ocean is wider,
And her fear runs deeper,
The tables have turned,
On this helpless creature.

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wow, that was so.. Beautiful, I mean, I am.. Completely blown away. LOL, I dont know what to say! It is very beautiful though, very.. I love it, you are a brilliant writer, and dont you fucking argue with me about that, you hear? lol. And, just wondering, may I use it in a banner?

Thanks hun *goes to argue but realizes its no use (matt always has last say :P)*

Sure ya can (but please credit) I'm really shibby about that lol. I'm honoured that you want to, actually, s thank you *hugs* :love:

ETA: I felt such a bitch for telling you to credit...omg lol...

Ahhhhhhhhh. *Gazes in awe at screen*.

You know that I always read your poems like three times each before I reply? I just love them so much. I want to read them over and over to make sure that I haven't missed anything.

Ah, the chills. Many many chills.

You are one of my all time favourite poets Kierra.

- Jessity B)

Ahaha, I always got the last word indeed! Mwahaha! ^_^

Oh, of course I will credit, I thought I wrote that I would..Odd. But of course I will! :D

Jessity: BLUSH!!!!!!!! omg thank you, that is so sweet, but in my opinion, you are MUCH better than me, but still..thanks *hugs*.

Matt: Sorry...:blush: *hugs*. Thank you.

:love: No need to be sorry! :D

this, my dool, is really sad. But so beautiful and well writen, that I almost forget all the passion and brilliance of it.
It's amazing... so full of meaning and feeling.
Lol, I never realised that meaning and feeling rhyme


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