Title: Giving In
Description: Would you be able to resist?
*eve* - January 27, 2004 06:12 AM (GMT)
Rated - G
This isn't even suggestive of anything. Go ahead and read. I'm sure I won't be sued. Don't you dare steal this. I claim this completely as my work and my work alone.
Marie looked at them, knowing they were wrong. She shouldn't do this. The past few weeks at the center had taught her to overcome this, or rather, attempt to overcome it. It had been easy talking about it, but the real thing was nothing like what they had talked about. Her hands felt a need to grat at it. It was perfect, exquisitely made, something that she wished her boyfriend would give her if only she had on. In places where the light caught it, the colors made it even harder to resist it. She longed to have it; she needed it. Even if she was dirt poor, she'd find a way to get it.
She looked around, no one had caught her staring. Maybe if she took it, no one would notice. She reconsidered. This could ruin everything for her. The day that she had walked into that center, her determination had been strong. She couldn't just throw that all away. This was a chance for a new beginning.
She had already started to back away when with one last glance, she gave in.
"Hi, may I have a sample of the white chocolate macadamia nut cookie please?" Screw Weight Watchers.
Mena - January 27, 2004 02:42 PM (GMT)
*wide eyes frantically*
*blinks*
*blinks again*
ooooooooohhhh!!! I got it!!!!
*bursts into astonished laughter*
Its SO cool!!! Eve dear, you always have rocking ideas!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:
Aurora - January 27, 2004 03:33 PM (GMT)
Hahaha you sure know how to surprise your readers! *laughs*
Very amusing ^_^
It had been easy talking about it, but the real thing was nothing like what they had talked about.
True true!!
*eve* - January 29, 2004 07:55 AM (GMT)
Matt - January 29, 2004 04:52 PM (GMT)
Ahaha, that was not quite like I expected it to be, the ending I mean. Hah. In a great way though, because it was kind of amusing, I thought she was a junkie or something, lol. Brilliant idea. :D
*eve* - January 30, 2004 05:30 AM (GMT)
Hahaha! A junkie! Whee! Go me! =]
Yeah...t'was supposed to be like that and I guess I can say I've succeeded. I've got one more short story. Now I have to type it up.
sxc_stylez - January 31, 2004 11:04 AM (GMT)
LOL! Hehe this is gorgeous. I love it very much so. :yay:
:baby:
*eve* - January 31, 2004 11:09 AM (GMT)
*muahz* Merci beaucoup! Love the baby! *hugs baby* *smiles stuff from it's diaper*
Umm..Chrissy? Your baby...
sxc_stylez - January 31, 2004 11:11 AM (GMT)
Pshaw, of course its not my baby. Like I would let my baby roam these boards, my baby is asleep in its bed, away from all the perviness. ;)2
*eve* - January 31, 2004 11:14 AM (GMT)
*cough* *snort* It's getting more perviness from you than all of use combined. I think I should take care of your baby...
Well. What about this baby? Somebody has to clean it up..
sxc_stylez - January 31, 2004 11:15 AM (GMT)
You can... it's your thread and your short story!
*eve* - January 31, 2004 11:18 AM (GMT)
Matt - February 5, 2004 03:39 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (*eve* @ Jan 30 2004, 06:30 AM) |
Hahaha! A junkie! Whee! Go me! =]
Yeah...t'was supposed to be like that and I guess I can say I've succeeded. I've got one more short story. Now I have to type it up. |
:D :D