I think something is missing.. A Poetry Club!!

So I thought.. Let's make one! So I called it 'The Dead Poets Society', after the movie, I believe I remember Robin Williams being one of the stars.. :)

I'ma make banners for the members if you want.. :)

Love, Jinx

oh....lovely....

i'm so in...


if you want you can make me a banner!

I cry every time I see that...well, almost. And yes, tis Robin Williams. *sigh* Dumb private schools...

Anyways...I love the idea of a poetry club. Poetry is just so...poetic. :P I love it, especially writing. Banners would be wonderful!

Um...what are we going to do as a 'club'?

:kiss:
Sam

this is so cool!!
I'm so in...^_^

I want to be in this club!!!

ANd i'd like to have a banner !!

Why won't we put a favorite poem line and we say things about it, or do like *add a chapter* but with *add a line?*

lol

luvly
andie!

that sounds like such a cool Idea!!!
^_^

*nods*
a brilliant idea!!

ooops :blush: *cough*
hello everyone!! :doh:

so..who's going to start?

Me!!



The sky is so red,
the clouds are so pink
i watch the green sunset
and i sleep in the purple night
i all have them while I sleep
in a dream of you and I


LoL

the next part the next girl ...

Savvy?

okay.......me next...

When I closed my eyes,
I saw you bright blue ones.
I saw that lovey smile spread cross your face.


next person

Hi! I love poetry and I love that movie so COUNT ME IN!

Here's my bit...

All is still but my heart.
Your whispers soothe my trembling soul.
Sweet caresses of words which kiss away the cold,
And wrap my mind in the most gentle of sighs.

- Jessity B)

Can I join? I love poetry!

uh... ditto that. i love poetry... and that movie.

although i haven't seen the whole thing yet but me and my friends are working on it!

:wub:

um... continuing that poem


Your arms' embrace,
The marks of cold on my body erase,
I'm trapped in love,
And falling ever deeper.


um... yea. ^_^ hope thats okay.

ooohh my turn! :wub:

I'm falling helplessly
cutting the night behind
but your face still lingers
in the sweetest scream I could find

The clouds turn black,
And so does my heart,
My need for you,
pierces me at last.

:blush:

The pain I've learned to bear,
but not the absense of your heart.
That's the thing I have not mastered,
to live while we are apart.

If your cross the sea,
my heart will broke,
my tears won't fade,
until your by my side again

The wind smiles as it passes by.
The sun turns a blind eye.
We are alone in sweet shadow,
Your eyes the only light I need.

- Jessity B)

to bring me deep inside the world
so strange and wild when I'm alone
so warm and soft if you're by my side
moulder of a shell where I can hide

Sorry to interrupt but is it late for me to join this?

It is there, upon your face
Where I seek for such sweet grace.
The days are warm with your comfort
As the nights are steamy with our lust
And being with you is never ending.

I don't know if that's good or so, but it'll continue what has already been started. Once again, sorry for interrupting and I repaid that with adding to this "Poetry Club". I"m not quite sure as if this is what we're going to be doing for the whole club but if someone, as so nice, to explain to me what this whole 'club' is about, that would be very helpful. Thank you.

*waves hands around head*

hello?? anyone there??? CMON guys... enthusiasm!!!

this is poetry. this is FUN!

are people still there?

:huh: :unsure:

But i woke up
and my purple sky is lost
and i searched for your eyes
in the blue memories of my own
where are you my white angel?
Will my tears find you?

Hey MysteriouStranger! Sorry no one replied before. What we're doing here is basically creating one really big poem by adding a verse one person at a time. Do you get it? ^_^. Hope I've helped.

- Jessity B)

*nods* yep yep. altho nobody's like agreed on the subject... its still going really well. i think im gonna recap like who's said what so far. so that its easier to tell where the poem is going. soo... here goes:

The sky is so red,
the clouds are so pink
i watch the green sunset
and i sleep in the purple night
i all have them while I sleep
in a dream of you and I
WhiteAndie


When I closed my eyes,
I saw you bright blue ones.
I saw that lovey smile spread cross your face.
Lessy

All is still but my heart.
Your whispers soothe my trembling soul.
Sweet caresses of words which kiss away the cold,
And wrap my mind in the most gentle of sighs.
Firestar

Your arms' embrace,
The marks of cold on my body erase,
I'm trapped in love,
And falling ever deeper.
Bludst@ndrozez

I'm falling helplessly
cutting the night behind
but your face still lingers
in the sweetest scream I could find
Mena

The clouds turn black,
And so does my heart,
My need for you,
pierces me at last.
Kierra

The pain I've learned to bear,
but not the absense of your heart.
That's the thing I have not mastered,
to live while we are apart
Sammi

If your cross the sea,
my heart will broke,
my tears won't fade,
until your by my side again
Lessy

The wind smiles as it passes by.
The sun turns a blind eye.
We are alone in sweet shadow,
Your eyes the only light I need.
Firestar

to bring me deep inside the world
so strange and wild when I'm alone
so warm and soft if you're by my side
moulder of a shell where I can hide
Mena

It is there, upon your face
Where I seek for such sweet grace.
The days are warm with your comfort
As the nights are steamy with our lust
And being with you is never ending.
MysteriouStranger

But i woke up
and my purple sky is lost
and i searched for your eyes
in the blue memories of my own
where are you my white angel?
Will my tears find you?
White Andie

yea. pretty cool :) its really LONG. ^_^ i think it should be up the starter of the poem to end it... so Andie whenever ya think its like... done... just say. is that alright?:huh:

:kiss2::

I think it's done ...

it's quite great for our first poem ...

i think that we should post it in the poems section ... and create another one ... jsut like that but iwth a theme...

what do you think?

luvly
andie

i think its great. ^_^

what bout the rest of yaz?

:kiss2:

like in a thread with the title of : Dead poets society
the poems

lol

luvly
andie

sounds good.

OI!!! IS ANYONE STILL OUTTHERE?!?!?

*cough*

um just checkin, you know, see if anyone's still got enthusiasm.

:kiss2:

I think it's a great idea :wub: .

well, i think it's a good idea too...i'll pitch in the next one though, ok?

I think it's a great Idea!!
^_^

Can I join? I think it's a great idea!

Okay im gonna go post up a thread in the poems section for our poems. ^_^

I'll call it the Dead Poets Society, The Poems.

Right. And okay, someone can start a theme for the next poem. Only you probably want to explain the theme so that we dont just have random verses and the poem actually makes sense. Si?

Me luvs!
:kiss2:

What if we have a dark theme. Like murderous or something?

Lol.

kier, murdoreous sounds great.

you wanna do the honors and start? because noone can match you, my darling, for dark things.

well... i havent seen anyone yet. lol.

just be a dear and tell us what's supposed to happen, and write a first verse. and we're good to go.

oooh, and if you want, you can specify a rhyming pattern and metre, that makes it harder. *nods*

^_^

what do the rest of yaz think? Input is always a good thing, you know. ^_^

I like the idea!!

dark huh ..??? i like it!

kierra! could you please be the one who starts?

luvly
andie

Sure. Okay, I never plot poems, so whatever you think fits is okay with me :D


The Bleeding Clock

My heart is raw,
My mind is cold,
I watch the blood seep,
From the bleeding clock.

Is that okay? It's just off the top of my head lol. I suppose it'll do, right? I can always change it :blush: I'm so silly...lol

:blink:

whoa.

spookyness.

okay.


Seconds tick by,
Each one a painful lifetime,
Yearning for escape,
From that damn Bleeding Clock.


um.... yea.... thats my little contribution.

:kiss2: