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*gasp* How did they find out about me and Dom?!? *turns to Dom, did you say anything?* :laugh: Just kidding...I can only wish right.

I like the beginning of this so far, I can't wait to see more.

Katie

<_< I hate paparazzi. (Who knew that word was so difficult to spell? :huh: ) They're so mean and stupid and prying and agghhhh!!! Its called privacy, people! Leave her be!

Beautiful start, Moon! It sure was a jump start.

:heartbeat:
Samma

Very exciting start sweetie.
I like how you portray Katie as just a normal girl, with a normal body instead of the usual blonde/model/superwoman.
The relationship between her and Dom is very sweet.

Can't wait to read more

Love, Moon

Hey you!

Wow what a start - I do think it's a hard story to write though, I know why I always kept far far away from it. ou're doing a great job so far!
Can't wait to so how this plays out, poor Katie.
*gives her a hug*

keep it coming :)

Laila

Oh, I love your beginning! I, too, must say how much I enjoy the fact that you've portrayed Katie as just your average, normal girl. I can't wait to see how this pans out with the media and if the stress ends up hurting Dom and Katie's relationship.

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That must be really tough on couples like that. I do feel bad for celebs like that.

Anyhoo I can't wait to see more :)

Katie

This *points up* is exactly why I never want to be famous. Effing paparazzi and stupid photographers. Maybe Petey Dunham had it right - "they're lying scum who'll do anything to fill the papers" I know I probably didn't get that quote down right, but its pretty damn close.

Good thing Dom has money to sue. Gosh, I hate these people! Leave them be!

:heartbeat:
Samma

Wow that is disgusting!
So distasteful, seriously I don't like paparazzi picturs as a general, but this is so far pver anyline there is! Fuck them buggers! *pouts*
I'm just happy that she is not immediately jumping to conclusions that Dom actually did give pics away... argh. It's so mean, I hate people.

:cry: :bat

great update,

love Laila

Ah! That is so terrible! I wonder who took those private pictures of them and then sold them to the tabloids! They should be sued and the annonymous source should definitely pay!

I'm glad Katie didn't think Dom did it, though. Yay for her reacting as well as she possibly could! :hug:

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I hate to say it, but I have suspicions about Lij... Hmm. I don't know, there's just this feeling I can't quite kick.

*shivers* Man, I don't know what I'd do if I were Katie. Probably get a new apartment, phone number, email, everything but a job, since she's obviously well-fit to that place. Nice boss, too.

Goodness. Okay, ready guys? This Peter Klein guy is GOING DOWN!!! :box:

*lol* It's always handy to be internet-savvy!
I'm really happy she is so sweet about it and not bitchy... It's nice and comforting... and I wanna know what happens next! So now that you have no school missy... keep them coming ;)!

love,
Laila

Ex-squeeze me? :lalala: Can't I keep you guys in suspense for some time? It wouldn't be fun without a nice cliffhanger every now and then, would it? Just wait, I shall post when the time is right... :tsk:

*will not comment ;)*


Love, Moon :hug:

Man that is disgusting, I mean, why would you want to do that to a person.
Granted since most of here are fans, we love info about them.
But for me that info goes on new projects coming up.
I don't really give a damn about who they're with, just let them be.

PETER KLEIN IS GETTING THE AXE. :knight:

k', or sword, whatever...

He is going down!

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I'm gone for a day of camping and you add 3 chapters?!

Dom snap out of it :anger: Katie needs you you loser. I hope Lij has nothing to do with this and is just a friend...hmmmmmmmm,....

Anyhoo I can't wait to see more :)

Katie

aww that's so mean!
come one movie people, look at Paris Hilton, having sexpicturs out boosted her career quite abit! Give dommie a break, fuckers!
That last scene was kinda cute though, poor Dom. It's weird though I actually thought that this would hit Katie harder first and now it's Dom who's gettimg fucked up.

It's very interesting where this is going, keep it up, ok?

*hugs*
Laila

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The love she has for him is overwhelming and eventhough it makes my scared for her. it also warms my heart.

Wonderful writing. Amazing isn't it, how lives are so easily wrecked.
I hate it.

Love, moon

Aww, that was heart wrenching!
Poor Dom and brave, brave Katie. God it's so aweful when people find no other way then destroy themselves like that. Especially Dom, funny good-natured Dom.
But he wants her to help him, it'll still be hard but he still loves her... and (i hope) everything will be fine eventually - right?

*hugs*
Laila

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Awww *runs up to Dommi and huggles him tighty tight* I love you Dom!
You can make it, you go, boy! :hug:

Great Chapter... too short though I want more more more :)
This is such a sweet fic! I just hope everything will be ok again... :cry:

Hey!! Sorry I've missed the chappies, poor Dom and poor Katie. I hope he gets his act together soon for both of their sakes. I'm glad he's gonna get help and super glad that Katie is there to support him.

I can't wait to see more Moon, I love it :)

Katie

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Awww...

*huggles Dom* That was so dman cute! And Katie... so now it's impossible for someone not to like these two, now give a damn part to Dommie - *lol* maybe a certain television show set on a remote island with creepy things going on?

Uh that would mean he'd be away again... no better not that one... *sigh* i dunno.

(my fingers hurt from typing cause I moron have cut my nails too short yesterday - ouch!)

hugs
Laila

Wow...poor Dommie :cry: And Laila's right, how could anyone not like those two after that...that was great..

Can't wait to see more :)

Katie

Gah! I come to back to like a berjillion chapters!!!

As for this last one, good that they were interviewed, but I'm nervous that the public won't take his abusing Katie (even just once) very well at all. His websites. The tabloids. Everything...

:heartbeat:
Samma

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What the bloody hell?? :blink: ...that's it? :anger: to Dom, you butthead. But good for Katie for trying to be there and raising their rather her daughter. Ella is a pretty name :)

Anyhoo, wow did not expect that. I wonder if she'll be a single mom or fall in love again, hmmm maybe a sequel??

Good job with this, clearly unexpected at the end though...

Katie

Wow. First, I can't believe he went back. Well, yes I can. He set himself a trap by telling about him hitting Katie.

Lij was totally in love with Katie from the start. At least she has a piece of his good side with Ella now, right?

And I can't believe you killed him off!!!

I really really liked this story MUCHO!!! So much energy and emotion and tension... beautiful.

Now, you leave us with only Fanmail? Pssh.

:heartbeat:
Samma

Very well written hun.
I like that you didn't make the story to long. that you gave us just bits and pieces of what they where going through, yet making it abundantly clear that they were ripped apart because of an outside force....

Though I feel sympathy for Dom, I feel more for Katie.... Her love has caused her so much pain.

This is another prime example of how lives can be destroyed easily with a snap of the fingers.
I hope for katie that she will be able to get herself back on her feet.
And while most people would consider her weak for staying to me it shows an extraordinary strenght.. probably for reasons I could not explain well in a simple post.

But honey the ending was bittersweet full of hurt and possibilities.

Chapeu

Wow it was strong.. After reading Fanmail I was hopping to see a miracle here and Dom all healthy and sober. But sadly you gave us this and it was so bittersweet...

You know? I'm always with the thought that if you love someone you have to be with that person in the good and the bad things. And I support it, but I have my doubts when children is between... How can you take care of a child if you have to take care of a grown up too?

And maybe Lij, my sweet sweet lij :wub: , should do something else than just call her every day and asked her why she didn't leave him. He'd just put Dom in an hospital and helped him with money since it was what he got and what they lacked...

But it was just me...

I hope that she gets up and be able to walk away from all the pain she most be into...

Great, short and beautiful story :)

guh....
That's the ending? So sad. And people are mean, why would they hate him for being sorry for everything he has done? I hate people. And dom. And everything ... *lol*
I really don't wanna go over and finish Fanmail now *chuckles*, where I thought the actual happy end chances are a little smaller than here ;).

*hugs* Good story though, but you know me... happy endings galore. *chuckles*
I guess in a way it is - well not happy, but at least she's free of him... even though she should have left him before I guess, which makes her just as weak as Dom in the end...

Anyway, good story, *lol* something cheerier next time? ;)

hugs
Laila