The poem is mine, though it was spurred by the last four lines that I once read somewhere so I can't take responsibility for those.
This piece portrais my feelings towards someone that once broke my trust.
Still after all this time I can't help but to long for his friendship again.
The fact that I still see him on a regular bases makes it just that bit harder.
But my damn pride won't let me get over it

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I Still….

When you smiled at me,

I forgot my pain and suffering.

The insanity of my life

Taken away by your soothing voice.

Your smile brought me

Unimaginable pleasure,

Every part of me ached to be

Held by you.

You were my stillness

In the middle of a never ending storm.

You were my hope,

My will,

My life,

I still love you.

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Please be gentle since I am somewhat of a huge chicken to post anything anywhere :scare

Love, Moon

Awww... it's good! And don't worry about posting here, I swear that none of us will eat you or anything. ^_^

:heartbeat:
-Feebs

I like it very much.
You convey your feelings very well,
yet it is general enough for me to be able to place my own meaning and feelings in it. Which is something I think a poem should do if it intended to mean something for others to.

I also like that it is not really sappy or mushy,
since I am not a huge fan of that.
It has for me the right amount of feeling and thought in it to be really appreciated.

Aw, its lovely. Keep posting. I love reading poetry on here.

And MY GOD is your name Moon?? I love that name. :D