Title: Seven Sullivan Sisters
LacedNBlue - March 14, 2006 04:41 AM (GMT)
Here it is guys! *grins* Enjoy!
Author's Name: Crisitna (LacedNBlue)
Rating: PG13 and R....
Genre: Romance
Main Character(s): Jordan, Olivia, Julianna, Samantha, Georgia, Kathleen, Antigone, Elizabeth, Zac, Chris, Hayden, Hugh, Jensen, Orlando, Billy, Gerard, and Christian.
Disclaimer: This is the idea that came from the movie/musical Seven Brides for Seven Brothers. The way it goes is all my idea though, so please refrain from taking. Thank you.
Warning: Amber has just made the banners, so every time I post the banner at the top it is that girl's point of view! *smiles*
*blows kisses*
Cristy
P.S. None of the guys in the story are famous.
LacedNBlue - March 14, 2006 04:45 AM (GMT)
Prologue:

“Mommy! Mommy! I need to go potty!” I cry over to her from the backseat.
“We’re almost there sweetheart, just hold it a little longer.”
“I can’t,” I whine.
“Try harder,” She says.
“Okay,” I answer, and cross my legs as my dad comes to a stop at a light.
“We have to go pick up the girls from school, so you’ll have to go there okay?” My mother says turning around to face me.
I nod, “Where’s Lizziebeth?”
“She’s at grandma’s house, because she was sick today.”
I see the light turn green and the car begins to move again. I look out of the window and scream in terror.
“DADDY!” I scream.
He turns to look at me for a split second and turns the wheel as hard as he can. The car spins so that the front of it is facing the oncoming car. With a loud crash of metal the other car hits us, causing mom and dad to be pushed backwards and onto me. I feel something tight on my neck and look at my parents before blacking out.
“DADDY!” I scream bolting upright. I look around the dark room and notice I’m drenched in sweat.
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~Jewelz~ - March 14, 2006 04:54 AM (GMT)
WAH!!! *pounces* First reader rights!!!! :getdown:
Be back in a moment with a more insightful comment ;)
*blink* WAHHHH!!!! :cry2:
I mean, I know we already read the prologue from the story choosing thing, but it's just so stinking sad! *huggles little Jordan* It's okay sweetheart! *tear* :cry:
Right then, off to watch Related ;) Can't wait for more of this though hun! Tchao!
LacedNBlue - March 14, 2006 04:54 AM (GMT)
And as a special treat, since you've already read the prologue...
Chapter One:

“Jordan? Jordan what’s wrong?” I hear my grandmother ask.
I turn to face her and then let my body fall back on my bed. I don’t answer but let her sit down next to me.
“I don’t remember them grandma. All I remember is the accident. I’m so horrible…I’m such a horrible person.” I cry.
“Oh sweetheart, no you’re not! You were only four years old.” She says, hugging me tightly.
I sniffle, and stare at the picture, “Will the pain ever go away?”
My grandmother pulls away and looks at me, “I’m sorry sweetheart, but I don’t think it will. With time it will heal, but it will always be there.”
“Grandma! Jordan! We’re home!” Samantha’s voice echoes through the house. I wipe at my tears and follow my grandmother down the hall towards the banister.
“We’re upstairs girls! Why don’t you start on dinner, we’ll be down in a few moments.”
“Is something wrong?” Georgia asks.
“No, Jordan still doesn’t feel well.”
The girls nod and turn to head into the kitchen. “She’s probably crying over mom and dad’s picture again.” Antigone sighs.
“Are you saying it’s a bad thing?” Sammi asks.
“No! God no; I’m just saying that it –“ Her words are drowned as they go into the next room.
I just turn and walk back into my bedroom. “They think I’m a loser.”
“No they don’t; they just worry why you cry so much about it.”
“Sometimes I feel like they blame me for it.” I tell her.
“Why?”
“If I hadn’t yelled at dad then maybe he would’ve not turned the car and I would be dead instead of the both of them. Maybe if I hadn’t yelled one of them would still be alive.”
“One of them instead of you, you think your sisters want that?”
I nod.
“Don’t you ever say that; don’t even think it! Your father did that so that you could live. He saved your life.”
I nod, “Sometimes I feel like it was my fault because I was in the car with them and I’m the only one alive.”
“Maybe God wanted it that way sweetheart.”
“But why,” I ask quietly, looking up at you, the hurt evident in my eyes.
“I do not know, but what I do know is that your parents wouldn’t want to see you thinking this way. They love you and would do anything for you, so don’t you ever think for one second that they died because of you. Understood?”
I nod, “Okay.”
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~Jewelz~ - March 14, 2006 04:58 AM (GMT)
*facepalm* Ah hahahaha!
*hurries off to read chapter one*
*hurries back during comercial* Woah, intense chapter. Poor thing! *hugs* I hope she realizes that her sisters really love her and don't blame her!
*runs off to watch Related*
Ambrosia - March 14, 2006 05:21 AM (GMT)
Aww! This is so sad! :cry: Poor Jordan, blaming herself. It's not your fault! :hug: The grandmother sounds very wise, Jordan should definitely listen to her. :yes:
So pumped that it's up!
Celandine - March 14, 2006 06:10 PM (GMT)
*runs around excitedly* It's up it's up it's up! :yahoo
Awww, four year old Jordan is so cute in the prologue, hehe.
But that's so sad that Jordan blames herself. :cry:
| QUOTE |
“One of them instead of you, you think your sisters want that?”
I nod. |
*gasp* Noooo, don't think that, Jordan! Then you guys wouldn't be the Seven Sullivan Sisters! And it's the parents' job to protect their kids anyway. Did the dad turn the wheel hard because he was going to turn around for Jordan, though?
Yay, great beginning, I agree with Amber, the grandmother seems to be a really nice woman with wise advice so far. And four out of the seven sisters have shown up, wheee. :woot:
LacedNBlue - March 14, 2006 07:13 PM (GMT)
Thank you guys soo much! Hehehehe...glad you like it! I will have more for you guys sometime soon...I have to rewrite the second chapter...make it fit this version! *grins*
Sammi - March 14, 2006 10:26 PM (GMT)
Awww....Poor Jordan! So whats the time difference between the prologue and first chapter? Thats soo utterly sad, Cris!!!
Man, lets get to the happy stuff, please? :cry:
Kloey - March 14, 2006 10:43 PM (GMT)
I LOVE IT!!! I'm so glad you've started to post this! It's absouletly fantabulous, amazingly sad, but wonderful non the less!!!
I so can't wait for more!!!
Chloe xxx
Kit-Kat - March 15, 2006 01:27 AM (GMT)
That was a brilliant start! comeon I do want to know also what the time difference is between the prolouge and the first chapter. I really like you clever idea of posting the banenrs at the top of the post to let you know whose POV it is. I can't wait for more, update soon! pulpfiction
:love:
~Kit-Kat~
Airefeaiel - March 15, 2006 05:44 AM (GMT)
Great start, I like hwo this is going! Can't wait to see what happens next *squee*
:heartbeat: Pat
LacedNBlue - March 15, 2006 04:26 PM (GMT)
Well, with chapter two you'll find out the age she was...*winks*
Chapter Two:

Twelve Years Later
“Hello?” I hear Jordan ask sleepily.
“Wake up call. Time to get up,” I answer her.
“I don’t have to go in today Sammi.” She grumbles.
“Oh! Well, get up anyway! You can go work out or do something else.”
“Work out? Nah….but maybe I’ll go dancing.” She answers instantly awake.
“Clubbing, this early in the day?” I question.
“No, not clubbing but dancing. Like at the studio. Maybe I will go into the studio today and see if they’re working on their dances. I love learning it with them.”
“I’m sure,” I giggle.
“What is that supposed to mean?”
“You know what it means. Anti told me what you said about that actor, Henry or whatever his name is. You fancy him.”
“Whatever, or did my darling sister forget that I have a boyfriend, and his name is not Henry.”
“Keep telling yourself that.”
She laughs, “Leave me alone and call the rest of the girls why don’t you.”
“Alright, have a great day and I’ll see you later. Love you,”
“Love you too.”
“Bye,” I answer and hang up. I finish getting my coffee and click on the number five on my phone. “Good morning Liv. It’s time for you to get to work so hop to it.”
Groan.
“Come on, you know you want to see those kids today.” I laugh.
“Okay, I’m up.” She protests.
I wait until I hear her bed groan. “Alright then, I’ll talk to you later. Love you.”
“Love you too,”
“Bye,” I tell her and hang up. I do this four more times before heading out my front door and into the morning air.
“This is going to be a wonderful day,” I say to myself, “I can feel it.”
So...since chapter two is twelve years later, and Jordan is twenty now...it means that she was eight when the dream in chapter one happened. :blink: I hope my calculations are correct. Hope you ladies enjoyed that one! More on the way soon!
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Celandine - March 15, 2006 06:31 PM (GMT)
Ahaha, that was great, I love it how Sammi is the wake up call sister. ^_^
| QUOTE |
“Good morning Liv. It’s time for you to get to work so hop to it.”
Groan.
“Come on, you know you want to see those kids today.” I laugh. |
hehe, me! lol. It seriously took me a while to realize that Liv was my character's nickname, haha. O"liv"ia, I get it now. :blush:
You don't even know how much that is like me *laughs* I am in no way shape or form a morning person. :lol: Go me and complaining about getting up...but I get to see little kids, aww...so do I go to libraries and read kids stories when I'm not writing them? That would be cute.
Oh, and the banter between Jordan and Sammi was amusing. Hmmm, who is this Henry? *ponders* lol. Oh, and Jordan's got a boyfriend already? Interesting...verrrry interesting...(ehehe PotC :potc: )
Great chapter, friend, I'm excited to see how this story develops! *she says as if you haven't explained two thirds of the plot to her already* hehe
LacedNBlue - March 15, 2006 06:37 PM (GMT)
Well my dear friend, you shall find out all of the information you are inquiring about soon enough. :blink: There are a lot of big words there Miss, and we are not but humble pirates. What is it that you want?
:laugh: Oh dear....hehehehe :pirate: w00t w00t Anywho...I am currently working on chapter three...in between studying for my INTRO TO LOGIC class *gag* I love math, but this is ridiculous! *cough* Getting off the subject at hand there Cristy....yes yes I know.
:blink: There I go...talking to myself again... :lol: I'm only kidding guys. I don't talk to myself...:unsure:...*coughoftencough*....:D
Anywho...yes...more soooooon.
*bows and blows kisses*
toodleZ
Kit-Kat - March 15, 2006 10:56 PM (GMT)
That was a funny chapter with the telephone calls :lol: and please update really soon! I can't wait to read more! :bloom:
:love:
~Kit-Kat~
~Jewelz~ - March 15, 2006 11:37 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
| QUOTE | “Good morning Liv. It’s time for you to get to work so hop to it.”
Groan. |
You don't even know how much that is like me *laughs* I am in no way shape or form a morning person. Go me and complaining about getting up... |
SO TRUE.
*whispers* Honestly guys, at camp one time I was throwing stuff onto her bed to try to wake her, and finally had to just poke her really hard in the arm *rofl* Silly Celly...
Cute chapter hun, can't wait for #3 :D
Ambrosia - March 16, 2006 03:27 AM (GMT)
hahaha! I love how Sam has to call all the sisters and wake them up. Priceless! Seems none of the others have heard of an alarm clock...or else they sleep right through them! :laugh:
LacedNBlue - March 16, 2006 03:33 AM (GMT)
hehehehe or Sammi is just the perfect older sister?
Sammi - March 16, 2006 05:30 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (LacedNBlue @ Mar 16 2006, 04:33 AM) |
| hehehehe or Sammi is just the perfect older sister? |
Hah! Its really the other way around here. ^_^
But, I suppose if I had to play the eldest sister of all those, without parents, this would be the case. Eeh. Death is what it would be, I'm telling you. :surrender:
Great work!
LacedNBlue - March 16, 2006 05:50 AM (GMT)
hehehehehe yup yup you're the cool older sister!
~Jewelz~ - March 16, 2006 06:51 PM (GMT)
*sniggers* Hey Cristina, I like your avatar; it looks vaguely familiar. Hmmm I wonder who you got it from *pretends to ponder*
*rofl*
(I do believe I may have talked her into a whole "Caution: Yank" series as of this morning- bwah hahahaha ;))
Kit-Kat - March 17, 2006 10:49 PM (GMT)
Jules did you make those avatars that you and Christina have? Cause if you did........ I WANT ONE!!!! :laola: :bloom: Pwease? :cry: They are so cool looking. Ok, sorry jacking thread here. :meh: I am going now, waiting patiently for an update.
:love:
~Kit-Kat~
~Jewelz~ - March 17, 2006 11:56 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kit-Kat @ Mar 17 2006, 02:49 PM) |
Jules did you make those avatars that you and Christina have? Cause if you did........ I WANT ONE!!!! :laola: :bloom: Pwease? :cry: They are so cool looking. Ok, sorry jacking thread here. :meh: I am going now, waiting patiently for an update. :love: ~Kit-Kat~ |
*look of utter shock* Meeee? Noooo *shakes head* Sadly, I cannot take credit for the wonderous-ness of zee avys. Perhaps the maker of the banners would like to step forth to begin takeover bwah haha?
I dunno *shrugs* Tee hee, I just know it twasn't me :D
LacedNBlue - March 18, 2006 06:28 PM (GMT)
Hahahaha...yes....it does look familiar doesn't it. *looks over and sighs* HAHAHAHAHA...well...we'll see if more sprout up! Well, ladies, here's
Chapter Three:

I sigh as I park the car. So much for such a good day, I think to myself, and walk towards Club Infinity. I smile at Raul, the bodyguard, chuckling softly at the looks I get when he lets me skip. I breathe in and smile, “Ah, the smell of sweat and booze.”
Raul chuckles and kisses my cheek, “Have fun Sammi.”
I walk in and head towards the bar. I sit on a stool and look around, a soft smile on my face. I wait for someone to wait on me, but groan when five minutes pass and no one shows up. I stand up and turn around, but hear a voice behind me, “Can I help ye love?”
I turn back around and arch my brow at the man behind me, “Where have you been?”
He takes a step back, wiping at the glass in his hand, and gives me a look of surprise, “Excuse me love?”
“I’ve been standing here for five minutes, and no service. I’m going to –“ I begin, but am cut off when I see Elizabeth walk behind the bar. I watch as she wraps her arm around the man’s shoulder and grins at me. I cross my arms and glare at him, “Don’t tell me this is your new bar manager.”
The man glances at Liz and my mouth drops open when she nods, “He is. Gerry, this is Samantha. I have to get back to work, so don’t kill each other.”
She grins and leans over the counter, kissing my cheek lightly, and then she turns to Gerry and gives him a hug, whispering in something into his ear. I take my seat back on the stool and give him a look, as if sizing him up, but really just checking him out. Liz walks away and Gerry turns back to face me, “What can I get for ye love?”
~Jewelz~ - March 18, 2006 06:35 PM (GMT)
Hey, hun, just to let you know- the banner isn't showing up (at least on my computer).
Right then *goes back to reading chapter* :D
LacedNBlue - March 18, 2006 06:42 PM (GMT)
thanks babe! It wasn't showing up on mine either...but I fixied it! w00t w00t
~Jewelz~ - March 18, 2006 07:06 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
| thanks babe! It wasn't showing up on mine either...but I fixied it! w00t w00t |
Good times :)
Cute chapter, hun- I see that we now have a certain Gerry in the picture (and that is never a bad thing :tsk: Hehehehe...)
Can wait for more :D Tchao!
Kit-Kat - March 18, 2006 07:15 PM (GMT)
That was a very cute chapter and I liked it. Sammi checking Gerry out was great! :laugh: I can't wait for a new update and thanks for telling me about the avi's Jules. I will again wait patiently for another update. :bye:
:love:
~Kit-Kat~
LacedNBlue - March 18, 2006 07:36 PM (GMT)
Hehehehe thanks guys! Well, I'm full of posting today! I just posted for DA, and now I'm gonna post for Murphy's Law in a few minutes, and then repost here...:unsure:....maaaaaybe....*smirks evilly*
Celandine - March 18, 2006 10:00 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (~Jewelz~ @ Mar 17 2006, 03:56 PM) |
| QUOTE (Kit-Kat @ Mar 17 2006, 02:49 PM) | Jules did you make those avatars that you and Christina have? Cause if you did........ I WANT ONE!!!! :laola: :bloom: Pwease? :cry: They are so cool looking. Ok, sorry jacking thread here. :meh: I am going now, waiting patiently for an update. :love: ~Kit-Kat~ |
*look of utter shock* Meeee? Noooo *shakes head* Sadly, I cannot take credit for the wonderous-ness of zee avys. Perhaps the maker of the banners would like to step forth to begin takeover bwah haha?
I dunno *shrugs* Tee hee, I just know it twasn't me :D
|
*evil laughter* It began with the forging of the great avatars...one given to Jewelz...immortal, wisest, and fairest of all beings (lol)...one given to Cristina...great miner and craftswoman of the mountain halls...and one, one given to me, who above all else...desire power (not really lol). Into each avatar was put the will to govern each post...but they were all of them deceived...for more avatars were made. In the land of my computer...in the fires of Mount Photoshop...the dark lord...me...(haha)...forged, in secret, some master avatars. And into these avatars, I poured my creativity, my weirdness, and my will to dominate all avatars. Many avatars to rule them all. One by one the free peoples of EWAC fell to the power of the avatars...oh wait, that hasn't happened yet. :shine: But yes, I made them...who do you want? lol Pssst, there's an Orlando Bloom one if you want him
Great chapter, friend! That was great how she was all snippity to the guy and he turned out to be the new manager, bwahaha, oh the irony. And yay for Gerry! *huggles him* who also has an avatar if someone wants it\
*whistles innocently* :lalala:
LacedNBlue - March 18, 2006 10:21 PM (GMT)
*dies laughing* OH MY CRAP! HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I haven't laughed that long in a while! Wow....heheheehehee....too funny man...too funny!
Thanks! :D I do try...*winks* I was working on the next chappie but I had to get out of it because my computer was messing up *tear*...but never fear...maybe ya'll get lucky and get another one sometime tonight. *grins*
Oooo...Gerry's avvy is sexy...*rawr*
Sammi - March 19, 2006 01:46 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Celandine @ Mar 18 2006, 11:00 PM) |
And yay for Gerry! *huggles him* who also has an avatar if someone wants it\
*whistles innocently* :lalala: |
Ooh! Ooh! Me! Me! *jums up and down*
| QUOTE |
| "What can I get for ye love?" |
Now. Do you really want the answer to that? :noangel:
Man, that is so like me. Jump down someone's throat.. I get it from my daddy. :surrender:
Celandine - March 19, 2006 02:10 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (LacedNBlue @ Mar 18 2006, 02:21 PM) |
*dies laughing* OH MY CRAP! HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I haven't laughed that long in a while! Wow....heheheehehee....too funny man...too funny!
Thanks! :D I do try...*winks* I was working on the next chappie but I had to get out of it because my computer was messing up *tear*...but never fear...maybe ya'll get lucky and get another one sometime tonight. *grins*
Oooo...Gerry's avvy is sexy...*rawr* |
Hehe, I'm glad you were entertained by that. But it's true!
Aww, I hope your compy starts working for you.
Uh...yup!
| QUOTE |
| Ooh! Ooh! Me! Me! *jums up and down* |
Yes, you, the awesome gal in the back...

I hope it's small enough to fit...if it isn't just tell me and I'll resize it. ;)
~Jewelz~ - March 19, 2006 02:25 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
| *evil laughter* It began with the forging of the great avatars...one given to Jewelz...immortal, wisest, and fairest of all beings (lol)...one given to Cristina...great miner and craftswoman of the mountain halls...and one, one given to me, who above all else...desire power (not really lol). Into each avatar was put the will to govern each post...but they were all of them deceived...for more avatars were made. In the land of my computer...in the fires of Mount Photoshop...the dark lord...me...(haha)...forged, in secret, some master avatars. And into these avatars, I poured my creativity, my weirdness, and my will to dominate all avatars. One by one the free peoples of EWAC fell to the power of the avatars...oh wait, that hasn't happened yet. shiny.gif But yes, I made them...who do you want? |
AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA *dies laughing*
*gaspgaspsputter* Eh hehehe, that was amazing Celly *wanders off, still sniggering* Teh hehe...
Kit-Kat - March 19, 2006 03:38 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
| *evil laughter* It began with the forging of the great avatars...one given to Jewelz...immortal, wisest, and fairest of all beings (lol)...one given to Cristina...great miner and craftswoman of the mountain halls...and one, one given to me, who above all else...desire power (not really lol). Into each avatar was put the will to govern each post...but they were all of them deceived...for more avatars were made. In the land of my computer...in the fires of Mount Photoshop...the dark lord...me...(haha)...forged, in secret, some master avatars. And into these avatars, I poured my creativity, my weirdness, and my will to dominate all avatars. Many avatars to rule them all. One by one the free peoples of EWAC fell to the power of the avatars...oh wait, that hasn't happened yet. But yes, I made them...who do you want? lol Pssst, there's an Orlando Bloom one if you want him |
Celly, you made me laugh so hard with that one. :lmao: And yes, I would like the Orlando one if it is still available. I just love those avi's and they are so cool looking. Still waiting patiently for another chapter. :bye:
:love:
~Kit-Kat~
LacedNBlue - March 19, 2006 04:25 PM (GMT)
hehehe Kat...you make me smile! :) You're so patient...lol....well, you are in luck. Because I just got back from blading four miles and I'm gonna go straight into SSS chappies. *grins*
Celandine - March 19, 2006 11:04 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kit-Kat @ Mar 19 2006, 07:38 AM) |
Celly, you made me laugh so hard with that one. :lmao: And yes, I would like the Orlando one if it is still available. I just love those avi's and they are so cool looking. Still waiting patiently for another chapter. :bye: :love: ~Kit-Kat~ |
*bows* Thank you, thank you, lol. Here are the two different Orlando ones, you can pick:
~Jewelz~ - March 20, 2006 12:09 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (LacedNBlue @ Mar 19 2006, 08:25 AM) |
| hehehe Kat...you make me smile! :) You're so patient...lol....well, you are in luck. Because I just got back from blading four miles and I'm gonna go straight into SSS chappies. *grins* |
*looks around* Hmmm....
*starts picking up random things and muttering to herself* No.. not there... I wonder... Nope, I don't see it there either. I don't see it anywhere!! *mock paniced look* Where is it????
... ^_^ Tee hee, I'm just teasing (though I would really like to read another chapter soon :D)
Tchao! *runs off* :bye:
Kit-Kat - March 20, 2006 12:58 AM (GMT)
Thanks celly for the Avi :wub: and Cristina I can't wait for your new chapter. Celly, this avi's are definatly goig to take the forum over! *evil laugh* cough, cough. OK I need to work on my evil laugh.
:love:
~Kit-Kat~