I didn’t know it would hurt this much
To see you, to try to be your friend
When all I want to do is hold you
Make you see that I am happier with you
Than without.....

To have all my friends say your not worth it
When I know, deep in my heart you are
I don’t love you, not yet
I know you’re hurting too
I see it in your eyes

Maybe I was stupid
Maybe you were stubborn
The maybes kill me
And the what ifs

My pride won’t let me fall back into your arms
You’re pride won’t let you admit your fault
So here we stand miserable, yet with our pride intact

It was a stupid argument
Why did you leave me?
Maybe I should have been clearer
Maybe I should have told you in person
Maybe, Maybe, Maybe!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope in ten years
You don’t wish things had gone differently
When that car is rusting in the junkyard
And you are all alone
Because I won’t let myself
Fall for you again
Because I learned my lesson
Did you??

Copyright Kate S.-January 2006

It's very sad,
and very clear
I liked the words you used,
and how you conveyed what you can feel,
if you break upw ith someone.

Good writing!!


One minor point (yep I am being anoying) but maybe it is useful to post a property and do not steal disclaimer.
Cause if people do now....you have not one leg to stand on cause you didn't specifically forbid it.
I would hate to see that happen.

thanx....

ok...umm im not quite sure how to do this but...if you steal/use/copy...any of my poems/stories etc. w/o out siteing me or referencing that it was not written by you...i will have to come after you with an abnormally large stick/knife/hatcht/gun/cannon etc. good...i hope you get the point

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