K, this isn't a traditional poem...well, none of mine are but that's not the point, the point is, this doesn't rhyme. I just wrote this tonight. As always, constructive criticism is welcome. :)

Copyrighted To and Distributed By Andria Turner, 2005. All Rights Reserved.

Hatred filled my eyes
As I look into your soul
Filled with cruelty
Malice

I pray for death
A slow, painful death
For the ones that did this to me
The ones that killed my soul

The soul I once had
Filled with love and compassion
Is now filled with destruction
Dreams of your destruction

I now have no soul
I hope you're happy now
I became something I never wanted to be
You turned me into a monster
You turned me into a cruel, hateful monster

You turned me into you...

Wow, This is so powerful and really amazing. Thanks for sharing

Anneka