A whisper...
One last breath
Oh, sweet boy

Couldn't you...
Just keep your mouth shut
Not be so brave
Still be here with me?

Your parents...
Hate me
Love her
Resent you

I...
Love you
Miss you
Will be there soon
Won't live much longer
Without a hear

Two whispers
Two last breaths
Two gentle sighs
Of lovers
Finally reunited

Ok this reminded me a bit of Romeo and Julliet. Ok so they don't kill each other together, but that unshakeable love. You captured it really well. I loved

this bit. So clever how you put it acroos it took me a few read throughs to get the meaning and when I did was like fantastic.