copyright k.s. may 05

In the cold
I can see your breath
Your chest rises
And then falls
I can hear your heartbeat
It's steady, calm, as I once was
Before I met you
Just lying here
Sends my heart
Into a tizzy, beating fast
This will never last
It's too perfect
Nothing ever happens
Not to me at least
I keep thinking
This is just a dream
You and me
But then you look at me
and plant a soft kiss
Just to remind me
That I'm not dreaming

wow wow wow. Ohh I wish I could pick out a bit to say this was good but it all was so inless I quote the whole poem which defeats the object umm yeah I like it.

*gropes for words* you made me speechless which is a hard things as you know...all i can say is HOLY SHIZA THAT WAS AMAZING!! ok I'm done ~Alli~