Title: Rain
Airefeaiel - May 14, 2005 09:11 AM (GMT)
I've always been bad at poetry and this is no exception, but I thought it had a pretty powerful message, somewhat inspired by Christina Aguilera's 'I'm Okay'
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It falls,
Washes all away.
The pain, the blood, the sins.
The memories plague,
A fragile mind,
Torn from sanity.
Bridges burnt,
Never going back.
You can’t go back
There’s nothing but dark.
Nothing but pain
Nothing but blood
Nothing but sin…
Nothing but him…
Copyright by Airefeaiel
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:heartbeat: Pat
j-e-s-s-i-c-a - May 14, 2005 09:30 AM (GMT)
Wow that's beautiful. I haven't heard the song that inspired you, but I sense it's about confessing her sins, or cleansing herself of an ex-lover? I think it's beautiful!
Airefeaiel - May 14, 2005 09:37 AM (GMT)
Thanks bella. *huggles* the song is about christina's father beating up her mother and her witnessing it. I'm glad you liked it :)
:heartbeat: Pat
mezzo di amore - May 14, 2005 10:27 AM (GMT)
Hi Pat Hey look this will be my first post on here! haha
*blinks* Wow I have to say I'm impressed. That was good. I see a poor little sad dark fairy spinning around in circles on a dew covered leaf...I have NO idea why but that is what I see when I read it. But that is really good,
Bobbie
the1ringrulesdaworld - May 16, 2005 01:31 PM (GMT)
I thought it was really good. I liked it. You put the emtions across really well.
tasha - February 24, 2006 10:38 AM (GMT)
Oh Airefeaiel, that was lovely. Keep writing! :yes:
Felonaz - February 26, 2006 04:52 AM (GMT)
It was lovely, beautiful. You manage to convey strong emotions with little words, and that's really impressive. Way to go! ^_^