Title: the flesh
Description: short, short silly poem!
Mena - September 6, 2004 06:26 PM (GMT)
Silence is white paper
for thoughts of ink.
Love is hands
for a pen of strokes.
Paper is bones
pivoting secret flesh.
Silence,
is the flesh of love.
Copyright of Mena, thank you.
WhiteAndie - September 6, 2004 07:09 PM (GMT)
Good job darlin'!! I liked the way you connected the lines, very clever!!
It was short and nice!! :) I liked it ...
Can I use one of the lines for a banner or an icon... ??? I won't offend if you say no :)
Andie
Mena - September 6, 2004 07:13 PM (GMT)
Sure not hun! :blush: It's quite flattering actually!
ninque elen - September 11, 2004 08:56 PM (GMT)
It's really a sweet little poem
Something that makes me smile
and feel good.
I like it very much!
tasha - May 12, 2006 09:01 PM (GMT)
Wow. Beautiful! *hugs Mena*
Skilos - May 14, 2006 06:47 PM (GMT)
I love this..
Short and sweet but it hit the nail right on the head with the last line
han - May 25, 2006 06:06 AM (GMT)
Simplistic, and gentle, yet every word precise. Very haiku of you. The other day my aunt was talking about her poet friends, how they spend months and months honing down each word. This kind of depth and true poetry is within this piece.
Laila - June 13, 2006 08:21 PM (GMT)
Hey honey,
I really like this, you really have to think about it and then it falls into place. It's awesome. And so beautiful... :)
:love:
And kinda true in many ways, For example I have always thought that the only people we can ever be completely comfortable with being silent around, are those we love in one way or the other - really good friends, family, lovers...
God, I love this poem and it's many layers! :)
hugs
laila