*opens the door*

(sound of door creaking..)
It's all dark and empty in Chao paradise.. The only source of light in here is coming from the door that I just barely opened. The Chao have gone from here,
''Anybody home?'' :scared
I take a slow step inside.
My voice echoes.. It's really dusty in here; it smells as if one has not cleaned this place for ages. I touch the surface of a desk, then I look at my finger that has picked up the dust and just turned grey. The whole place is grey. It is so quiet here, that you can almost here the spiders crawling about the wall. A mouse scurries across the floor.. I take a look around as I rub my thumb against my finger to smudge the dust.. There's cobwebs everywhere, an old gas heater and a broken chandelier on the ceiling. And a staircase that looks as if it hasn't been used for years. I then gaze at a picture on the wall. Memories come rushing back to me:
*Enters a room that looks like some royal throne room*

There are tons of guests on either side of a Well laid out red carpet. I am at the door and they are all waiting to greet me. I walk forward...

''Welcome Chaclon'' they all crowd around me..
One of them gives me a kiss, one gives me a hug, one gives me a welcome card,
''Okay, Okay!'' I say..
One gives me a bunch of balloons, one puts a garland around my neck, one gives me a bouquet of roses, one gives me a heart cushion, one gives me a wrapped up gift and one of them gives me a 'welcome to chao paradise T-Shirt.'
''OKAY!'' I shout loudly and they all stop.

WELCOME TO CHAO PARADISE! They all shout..
The 'King' (One of the Admins) comes forth:
''Welcome to Chao paradise, Chaclon...''
The 'King' gestures me to the throne, I drop all the gifts. The 'king' puts his crown on my head and I sit on the throne...
I AM AS HAPPY AS EVER TO JOIN CHAO PARADISE...
Suddenly, the flashback goes..
There's no reply.. :normal
...So I turn around, and walk back towards the door. My footsteps echoe loudly... I approach the door and open it. The light comes in, the door creaks and I step forward... I'm in the doorway. I take another quick glance around, a tear slides down my cheek, and then I slowly shut the door behind me... :blank

...Um? :|

We have a new forum, though inactive. Why not help us advertise so you don't have to have "tears sliding down your cheeks"? Just because Vox Kritika is dead at the moment doesn't necessarily mean it will always be.

Oh hai Peaches. :wow
You're the admin.. So 'Vox Kritika' who thought of the name? And when is it going to be complete? (I know I can sign up.. but I'm not gonna yet)
Anyways, you liked my post above didn't you? Heh heh.

+ How Can I help?? tell me how..