Name: Blu

Nicknames: N/A

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Height: 5'6

Weight: 140 Pounds.

IQ: 159

Residence: Rocky Mountains

Alignment: Neutral

Special Attacks:

Ability to move sand: blu moves the sand using either his mind to control what the sand does or by speaking it out loud. (The sand does not protect blu, blu must protect himself)

shadow capture: is used to capture his enemies and kill then with either choking them or killing them with his sword. (It only works in the shadows)

Abilities & Aptitude: good at tricking his enemies into the shadows were blu lures them to there death (yes I know don’t post about it lol)

Hobbies & Talents: likes to think about things while carefully planning them out.

Weaknesses: blu hates chocolate... he is allergic to chocolate... so yes he will have a reaction if chocolate comes in contact with him.

Likes/Favorite activities: blu likes to sleep a lot because he doesn’t like to try and strain himself or excite himself.

Dislikes/Least favorite activities: working…

Gourmet of choice: just a plain salad… yes with ranch >.<

Beverages of choice: Coke a cola

Favorite color(s): blue, black

Personality: Blu is a quit person. He doesn’t really like to talk to the people who he plays games with. He will answer some of there questions though.

Physical Appearance: Blu is a slim person because he does not like to eat a lot. Blu isn’t that muscular because he is too lazy to work out but he still manages to train at least a half an hour every 2 days. He also has a missing arm that he lost in a fight with his last opponent, Ethan.

Skin Color: tan
Eye Color: green
Hair Style: hair is always in front of eyes
Hair Color: black with blue steaks

Attire:

Urike Trench Coat: Blu wears this because it has a mix of his 2 favorite colors.

Urike Bottoms: same as above ^

Items & Weapons:

Golden Dragon Sword: blu's choice weapon of battle, it has a slight affect of a stunning ability so that he can just get the battle over with quickly.

Repair kit: this is a little device that helps repair/feeds ammo to his shotgun; blu only uses this when he is using his Avenger Mk.11

Avenger Mk.11: Blu doesn’t like to use his shotgun but if he has to result to his guns he will not hesitate to take out his opponent.

Back Story: A small child named Blu learned the techniques of how to use and control sand, and shadows. His father, Crackers, trained Blu how to do this. But as Blu became more educated he started parting himself from others. His father was concerned about Blu but when he went to ask what was going on... Blu had run off to the Rocky Mountains, which he longed to live at...



meh i hope you enjoyed reading this :>.>

Weakness: well that's quite obvious, really.

TC is too tired to point out the problems this you're character, so you look it over again and point them out yourself. I'll get back at this when I remember

Actually, not bad for a beginner. Don't mind TC he's just jealous because your using my Template and not his. ;D Or should I say cat's template? :scared Last time I didn't give her credit, she nearly bit my head off for it ><

sorry for second post :scared :hyper!

TC or some other person who knows how to catch problems, please check the profile and see if it is any better >.>

I took the liberty of fixing your various spelling/grammar mistakes within the quote. Check and compare. Also, here's your various criticisms.

In the order in which they appear:

1. Major of what..?

2. Doesn't that seem a little too high for someone whose strength is not their intellect?

3. Someone's been watching too much Naruto.

4. I posted about it.

5. ...who would he be protecting and why?

6. If he was allergic to chocolate, wouldn't any sort of contact with it result in some reaction anyway?

7. This isn't really a "least favorite activity."

8. This brings me back to my point earlier: if he's antisocial, why would he be challenging people to random games of chess?

9. Doesn't strike me as particularly lazy.

10. If he's antisocial, why would he want to play with people?

Those are pretty much my primary complaints. Edit as you see fit.

I see his character as a lazy, classical, maniacal, weird, annoying, and idiotic RP character. No offense intended, but I think he's just trying to make his character do different things that don't match his personality to try and get everyone to like it.

1. Major of what..? - no rank now

2. Doesn't that seem a little too high for someone whose strength is not their intellect? - true

3. Someone's been watching too much Naruto. - so what it not illigal lol...

4. I posted about it. - ...?

5. ...who would he be protecting and why? - if you read correctly it said " people he had too protect" but changed anyways.

6. If he was allergic to chocolate, wouldn't any sort of contact with it result in some reaction anyway? - posted it

7. This isn't really a "least favorite activity." - my bad misread it

8. This brings me back to my point earlier: if he's antisocial, why would he be challenging people to random games of chess? - changed it

9. Doesn't strike me as particularly lazy. - mhk... tweaked as said before

10. If he's antisocial, why would he want to play with people? - changed

any better? >.<