Name: Chaosky

Nicknames: Chaosky

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Height: 25 inches

Rank: Master

Alignment: Good/Hero

Special Attacks: Super Sword Spin.It does huge damage

Weaknesses: Fire

Items & Weapons: Your character's equipment, and weapons.

Back Story: A war has taken place in my town,and i want revenge.

what would kiao do......

Oh, he already made a profile... never mind that comment in RP fights then >< and no kiao would do something much more harsh than that. Most likely put up the password again to keep dumbass n00bs from messing it up.

First of all, to be fair, he did use most of the Minimum Requirements.

On the other hand, this is still a big festering shitburger.

Major problems in order of appearance (bolded in quote):

1. So he's Chaosky, who is also nicknamed...Chaosky? Why'd you just put his name twice? Get a clue.

2. Self-explanatory.

3. Master? Of what? Appears to be a master of shitty descriptions from what I've seen.

4. Huge damage? What is "huge damage?" As opposed to "giant" or "big" damage? Please.

5. I can't tell if this is laziness or just you trying to be clever. So I'm assuming it's both. And it disgusts me.

6. Oho, clichéd vengeful hero, step on down! But what exactly are you trying to vengeance on? Your lack of originality? Another thing: how can a war take place in a single town. A war is described as two countries in some sort of conflict. So how the fuck can a single town be two countries? It can't. Sorry, you lose.


If you ever want to be able to RP, fix this profile up. As soon as possible.