Title: Blood
Description: R u talkin' 2 meh?
BumbleBee - July 18, 2007 01:12 AM (GMT)
EDIT
Nickname(s): Zytashi
Age:14
Date of Birth: 6/3/93
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 2"
Weight: 113
Blood: ( Optional) O
IQ:121
Birth Place:Tokyo
Residence:The world, he wanders
Alignment: (Good or evil) neutraul
Last recorded top speed on foot:I dunno, like warp behind you fast
Last Recorded top speed in Air: 56mph
Abilities
Advanced Fire teqniqes
advanced Genjutsu
Weaknesses: Holy Type attacks
Personality:Care free/Silent(will do anything to win a attle ;D)
Appearance-
pic coming soon, Gotta draw him
Items: Explosivee tags,Light bombs, Flameable string
Weapons: Shurikan,kunai, Katana
Back Story:blood was part of an infamous gang of criminals. They did petty stuff such as theft, Robbery ,ect ect ect. Then when the gang turned to a more serious crime(murdering the lord) He refused. Then the gang beat him up till' he was knocked out. so he went to the lord's castle but he was to late they already killed the Lord. So he killed his gang for beating him up. When guards arrived they saw te Lord dead, and 4 other people dressed as guards and one person standing. So they assumed that he killed the lord and the lord's body guards. So they attacked Blood. Blood had no choice to fight back. So he killed the guards, and left thevillage as a wanted criminal.leh end.
Kiao - July 18, 2007 01:43 AM (GMT)
Oooh, Blood. What a completely original name. You're a creative genius.
An IQ of 182 for a common street thug? Yeah, right. Try somewhere in the 110s, maybe in the low 120s. Christ, I don't even know why we put IQ, because apparently half of you don't have a damn idea what it really represents!
What really gets me is somehow he managed to kill his gang, which beat him up earlier with no problems, and then trained guards a short while afterwards?
Tweak it a little more, but other than that, it's fine.
BumbleBee - July 18, 2007 01:51 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kiao @ Jul 17 2007, 08:43 PM) |
What really gets me is somehow he managed to kill his gang, which beat him up earlier with no problems, and then trained guards a short while afterwards?
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Its possible ;D
Tactic Sniper - July 19, 2007 01:27 PM (GMT)
I want to know what the crap is "Last Recorded top speed in Air", doesn't make sence to me right now.
If we're talking about a theif gang, take the ninja stuff out a kunai or katana is fine but I don't see theifs running around with katanas, let alone shurikens.
If he's a ninja, up the IQ a bit. But take the explosive stuff out.
I don't mind the fire tech. Due to what the Back Story says I can kinda see why he's weak again holy attack. Can you explain genjutsu, I think I forgot some vocab.
~"TC"
BumbleBee - July 19, 2007 02:40 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Tactic Sniper @ Jul 19 2007, 08:27 AM) |
I want to know what the crap is "Last Recorded top speed in Air", doesn't make sence to me right now.
If we're talking about a theif gang, take the ninja stuff out a kunai or katana is fine but I don't see theifs running around with katanas, let alone shurikens.
If he's a ninja, up the IQ a bit. But take the explosive stuff out.
I don't mind the fire tech. Due to what the Back Story says I can kinda see why he's weak again holy attack. Can you explain genjutsu, I think I forgot some vocab.
~"TC" |
Genjutsu is mindtricks basically, Illusions.
Ultimate Devil Chao - July 31, 2007 03:39 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (BumbleBee @ Jul 17 2007, 08:12 PM) |
EDIT
Nickname(s): Zytashi
Age:14
Date of Birth: 6/3/93
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 2"
Weight: 113
Blood: ( Optional) O
IQ:121
Birth Place:Tokyo
Residence:The world, he wanders
Alignment: (Good or evil) neutraul
Last recorded top speed on foot:I dunno, like warp behind you fast
Last Recorded top speed in Air: 56mph
Abilities
Advanced Fire teqniqes
advanced Genjutsu
Weaknesses: Holy Type attacks
Personality:Care free/Silent(will do anything to win a attle ;D)
Appearance-
pic coming soon, Gotta draw him
Items: Explosivee tags,Light bombs, Flameable string
Weapons: Shurikan,kunai, Katana
Back Story:blood was part of an infamous gang of criminals. They did petty stuff such as theft, Robbery ,ect ect ect. Then when the gang turned to a more serious crime(murdering the lord) He refused. Then the gang beat him up till' he was knocked out. so he went to the lord's castle but he was to late they already killed the Lord. So he killed his gang for beating him up. When guards arrived they saw te Lord dead, and 4 other people dressed as guards and one person standing. So they assumed that he killed the lord and the lord's body guards. So they attacked Blood. Blood had no choice to fight back. So he killed the guards, and left thevillage as a wanted criminal.leh end. |
OMG, you used my template! :O
BumbleBee - July 31, 2007 08:12 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Ultimate Devil Chao @ Jul 30 2007, 10:39 PM) |
| QUOTE (BumbleBee @ Jul 17 2007, 08:12 PM) | EDIT
Nickname(s): Zytashi
Age:14
Date of Birth: 6/3/93
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 2"
Weight: 113
Blood: ( Optional) O
IQ:121
Birth Place:Tokyo
Residence:The world, he wanders
Alignment: (Good or evil) neutraul
Last recorded top speed on foot:I dunno, like warp behind you fast
Last Recorded top speed in Air: 56mph
Abilities
Advanced Fire teqniqes
advanced Genjutsu
Weaknesses: Holy Type attacks
Personality:Care free/Silent(will do anything to win a attle ;D)
Appearance-
pic coming soon, Gotta draw him
Items: Explosivee tags,Light bombs, Flameable string
Weapons: Shurikan,kunai, Katana
Back Story:blood was part of an infamous gang of criminals. They did petty stuff such as theft, Robbery ,ect ect ect. Then when the gang turned to a more serious crime(murdering the lord) He refused. Then the gang beat him up till' he was knocked out. so he went to the lord's castle but he was to late they already killed the Lord. So he killed his gang for beating him up. When guards arrived they saw te Lord dead, and 4 other people dressed as guards and one person standing. So they assumed that he killed the lord and the lord's body guards. So they attacked Blood. Blood had no choice to fight back. So he killed the guards, and left thevillage as a wanted criminal.leh end. |
OMG, you used my template! :O
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Cat's Template.
Ultimate Devil Chao - July 31, 2007 08:38 PM (GMT)
stfu and just call it mine. J/k. Yea, I know... :>.>