Title: I promised Lugana.
Description: I said I would post my misc. paragraphs
Three - March 18, 2006 07:25 PM (GMT)
Okay, I promised lugana I would post my miscellanious paragraphs on here. These are paragraphs I do every night - they have no meaning, they are exercises that I do to change up my writing. Most of them are out of my genres or usual writing style so they are not my best work. Here they are:
1) "They call her Young Medusa, My Lord. It is said that even the bravest of men have died by her merciless sword. The churches have banned the use of her name on the streets - her spies are everywhere. She makes even the most fearless of soldiers tremble with fear." "That may as well be, Boy," replied Sir Rhichar, "but she is only a woman. You, who wish to become a knight, should know that women are not to be feared." The squire studied the floor for a moment, he supposed what the knight said could hold some truth... but he had already seen what her Lady Knight was capable of.
2) Mary Mallory was, from the time of her birth, the most unfortunate being alive. As an infant she was left in the care of Mr. Andrews and his lady, and being always told that she was inferior to the Andrews' five children, she had not the knowledge nor the grace of the noble blood she carried within her veins. Having no proper claims on beauty, elegance, or fortune, she was devoid of any qualities which would place her higher into the Andrews' regard. She therefore, spent her time in the upstairs library, filling her head with the words of dashing heroes and graceful heroines - and schemes which could only get one into trouble.
Those are the only ones I could find at the moment... I know they have many errors, but that is because they are just unrefined lumps of ideas. Feel free to comment - especially if you have advice. :mellow:
Ms.BACPACLady - March 18, 2006 07:31 PM (GMT)
B'DAMN! Why have not you puplished a FREAKIN' book yet. good writing. seriously, write a book....so I can READ it! :D :D :ph43r:
Three - March 18, 2006 07:34 PM (GMT)
Like the first one? I was feeling feminist after what my spanish teacher said. :lol:
Ms.BACPACLady - March 18, 2006 07:40 PM (GMT)
woo hooo, FEMINIST!!!!!!!!!!!!
aleana15 - March 20, 2006 05:11 PM (GMT)
These are reallt good. I love sometimes just sitting down and writing the first thing that comes into my head. No planning, just a few minutes writing. Those two could easily be turned into longer stories though, if you ever feel that way inclined.
The Thought Fox - March 23, 2006 11:07 AM (GMT)
Those are good. You should pick one that you felt particularly comfortable with and try writing a story. The first one caught my interest more than the second, but that's just because that's the sort of stuff i read.
Three - March 30, 2006 04:54 AM (GMT)
*giggles* I just wrote a page (on paper) concerning that story... I may post it later.
The Thought Fox - March 30, 2006 09:54 AM (GMT)
Good Good. Can't wait to read it.