His claws slit through my flesh, his arms slithering around me and just like a snake with its prey, he squeezes me tight taking the air from my lungs. My heart had given up long ago; I was under his control.

To run was to fall and without him I most certainly would. He hisses death wishes in my ear, promising to hold me forever…And ever. When I was finally dead he said he would come for me so then we could be together even when we were dead. If I were to struggle he would deepen his cuts.

His face was pale as if he was dead. His eyes were a piercing green that raised the hairs on my arms if he hadn’t already singed them with his fury.

I remember the day he took my voice. He held me tight and ripped through my skin carelessly with the needle, the more I screamed the slower he would stitch just to maximize the pain, He grinned and kissed my torn and bloody lips swollen by his twisted surgery and then left me there but not to rot, just to marinate in my own sweat, blood and tears.

I pray to God ever night, just as mother said. I said, “Thank you God, thank you for my husband and all he’s done for me. My heart is full of him, these wounds are just a way to say I love you.”

I look up and see my Mother's head like a token from a hunting trip, it was present from my other half. It was so I don’t forget her, her beautiful eyes, her sweet tender skin and the way she screams as her head is torn off bit by bit.

Oh and his embrace, I can never forget that…

At night I scream his name in pain as he wraps himself around me…

I cry…Fear.

Wow! That's really good stuff. A good use of the first-person perspective; we feel the pain, but we see how she feels about it.

Why thank you ^^

Origonally I did it for a competition at my school about Fear but in the end there was no reply about it which really pissed me off.

I thought it was a great idea to do a metiphor of Fear was rather clever! :P


^_^


Meow!

thats really quite scary (TT.TT)

chillingly good work... wow. Now I must read all of your posts. ^_^

Lol, ^^


Chilling: good

I liked this one especially as well.

I can see that its been said already but if your still unsure i'll say it again....Chillingly good work!