I'm not strong with bad guys..Needing some help with a Mr. Jason Brown. here's the little info I got on him at the moment.

Name:..Jason Brown

Age: 35

Appearence: He's 6'4, with dark brown hair and eyes with no distinct color. He wears a brown suit all the time;. This man has a large ego people! He likes his name and likes wearing it. :)

Occupation: Gang leader sorta..But not tough. He carries a gun and blackmails or threatens people to do what he wants while sitting on his big, over stuffed chair. Oh, and he's filthy rich as well.

What I need though, is how he acts. I'm at the point in my story where he first meets my star and now, I am stuck as she learns she is trapped. I have no way for him to act towards her! Smooth and cold? Perhaps taunting? Please help!

try warm and friendly. If your characters perceptive they can notice that something is not quite right with them, if not then they will be surprised when the turn cold and hard. try and find a distinctive charactersistic like "....his eyees searched everywhere continually, as if to find every thought against him and pry every secret from the shadows.." I used a smile, dont you dare steal my idea..... also mention a walk, it would probably be cocky and sure, if it is smooth and agilee you could make refrence to say a cat. If it is just heavy you could mention plodding along like the raw constructed power of the earth.

Actually, my star already knows he's bad because of..The talking cat. yes, a talking cat! -eye twitch-. My star can understand the language of animals ya see. But I like your suggestions. I might be able to twist them.

personally, i like smooth evil characters, much more class, lol, but it's what you decide is best for your story. His personality could be partially his weakness, which helps his downfall