Love is an unconditional thing….
If one were to force love,
It would bloom into the gloomy flower of lie.
An unusually thorny flower, which hurts people.


Now we all know this poem is my sig, but what does it mean to you? Or what does it me in general?

Feel free to comment.

to me love is something that comes completly out of the blue and is unexpected, but then again to be loved youve got to be lovable.

I wish i was loved....

What do you mean by that?

I mean the love that a couple shares. The uncondinotal love taht it dont matter how one looks, they are loved anyway. I wish i had a significant other. To be trully accepted by another person. To wake up next to a person and have jungle breath and untidy hair and not have them care. Thats the love i'm talking about.

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I know what you are talking about....

I to am not a prince charming and I have felt bad about it before as well….

But it was not luck that I found a girl friend. It was not luck that I have shared more with her then anyone in my life. I loved her, so I expressed it to her. I helped her when she was down. I gave her advice when it was needed. I kept her safe.

When life became unbearable, when the fights became too tough, when my own family tolled me I was not good enough, I just kept my head up, with a smile.

You have to keep your mind open and your heart alive.

Never try to pretend to someone your not. Never try to keep hate in your heart.

Always forgive, and always keep your head up high. Dare to stair into people’s hearts. If they reject you because they are shallow, they are not right for you.

The ticket to the future is always open. You will find someone. I promise.

I hope yoru right. Eagle will tell you how much of an optimist i am. I never let these things get me down. I try to not to pretened to be smoeonen else, but sometimes it seems i'm doing the tings that other people want instead of what i trully want, what i trully want is the mystery.

Eagle will also confirm that i aint a prince charming, i look like bulldog crossed with a poodle.

Love, what an amazing thing.

im the opposite everything ive got ive had to fight for and thats the way i like it. Love, respect and all of it. Im a pessimessist basically and i belive trust, love and respect is given youve got to earn it.

Out of the 9 years i have known him. I know that he is indeed a fighter.

cept nowadays i try to fight for something worthwhile like my friends and family

Love? no such thing, i dont believe in it till i feel it and i'm not willing 2 let myself feel it. . . :unsure:

Love…

I never believed in love…

Till I felt it.

The day I felt love is the day my life changed.

I was heading into a godless world of fighting and hatred.

But then, I found love.

I believe what this poem says, because I believe in love.

I wish I could find a way to tell you how it feels, but I could never find the words.

It may sound like bullshit now to your ears, but just wait.

I may be not found in a guy. It may be not found in a family member. It is found in the unconditional love of god, but that is if you choose to have it.

You will all find love. I swear on my life you will.

Once you do…

Welcome to the real life.

i believe i will find it, but wen i do, it will take me ages to admit its love, i wont want to admit it

youll find it and then itll f**k you up three ways from sunday....

thanx eagle. .. thats really um. .interesting?

That first poem is excellent, and I understand. When I tried to love a girl that fancied me, it went horribly wrong, and she cheated on me with my friend.



bitch

u cant try 2 luv sumone, i noe that much

love isnt something you can force

gotta find it b4 u can feel it

that is so rong Lou!

how???

How r u suppossed 2 feel it if it isnt there? u have 2 find it and then u can feel it

Love is like a garden of thorns, with a single vibrant rose in the middle. There's a possibility you'll reach it, but you'll most DEFINITELY get scratched to bits on the way.


I'm not a pessimist...really....

love is when you die inside because you feel that the person you love doesn't care.
Love is when you hurt someone you love and get depressed
Love is the fights, the desperation and the fury of a marriage
Love is the best and worst feeling in the world
Love is indecisive
Love is confusing
Love is something that only properly happens in stories
Love is complex
But in the end, I'm sure,
Love is worth it

Thats my odd poem for you...now go do something happy before you go jump off a bridge.

Cool DL!!!

I am more of a story writer than poetry but I'll give it a try.

I have a love of his presence so I can sing his praises.
To stand in his shadow so I can feel his protection.
To walk down his path so I can feel at home.
To talk to him out loud, so I don't feel so alone.

His love is strong and deep besides it knows no limits and
in me it resides.
When times are dark and my way is uncertain his love
shines bright and takes me forward.

My love was untrue but he forgave.
My heart was heavy and in dismay.
Nothing but conflict had come my way.
My life was forfeit , but he took my place.
Now love has gone and died.
And so have I, until the day we
reunite high up in the sky.

What do you guys think, I am not pleased with the word forward any ideas???

what about...instead of take me forward...
calls me forth?
pulls me through?
or just...
shows the way?

thats pretty madd

i have one but i'm not gonna post it coz i'm not gonna accept it :blink: i noe that didnt really make sense but it did 2 me :P

ke? :blink:

my thoughts exactly

nice to know we're all on the same wavelength here :D

well im confused!

lol. . .my work here is done

:D Excellent I like the calls me forth option sounds very poetic!!! Thanks DL.

oh no! Don't tell anyone I have a poetic, romantic side! :o

hehe

don't you laugh at me, I'll cry! :P

my opinion about love has changed peoples!

*puts on 'I have a heart of stone, so there' tshirt*

These poems are really cool. You guys are great at this stuff.

(Mental Note: DL4 has poetic, romantic side. Potential blackmail. Muhahahahahaha, etc.)

Heh, I have pleeeenty of blackmail material for you, Batch. demon has a camera hidden in your house :lol:

:o :o :o :o NEVER EVER SAY THAT!!!!!! :o :o :o :o