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Title: First Character Development


Lugana - December 31, 2003 10:18 PM (GMT)
Male characters:


Clairc Lockheart – Swordsmen and soldier

Age) 23

Appearance) 5’11, short blond hair, dark blue eyes (changes), medium strong body structure.

Cloths) White long sleeve or sleeveless shirt, blue jeans or navy blue fighting pants, brown combat boots, sliver cross hanging from his neck.

Personality) Loner, kind, keeps to himself, stays out of other people’s problems, and feels as though the weight of the world is on his shoulders.

Bio)

During the War of Earth, his parents had been killed protecting him during a raid on Maran. Clairc was seven when it had happened.
His father had left him his sword. Clairc being only seven had no idea to weald such a weapon. To support himself, he used the sword to fight for money. After each battle, his self-taught skill and technique increased. He eventually found a job as a top class soldier




Lugana McCloud – Swordsmen and soldier

Age) 21

Appearance) 5’9, long blackish brown hair, soft green eyes, medium agile body structure.

Cloths) Black sleeveless shirt or T-shirt, white fighting pants or blue jeans, brown tennis shoes.

Personality) Free sprit, wild, lively, hopeful out sites on life, social, and never flows with what’s happening.

Bio) At the age of fifteen, his parents were kill before his very eyes by a pack of wolfmen. He had learned the sword though his father and was gifted with his skill with it. He defeated the pack of wolfmen single handedly, but at a price. He had to live with the fact that he could not save his parents, or the village. He was the soul survivor. He, with his father’s sword, started to travel the lands in search for jobs and people to save.
He is never going to let someone die in his presents again. No one deserves to have live without a loved one.



Female characters:


Selena Desertrato – welder of a giant boomerang and rebel

Age) 20

Appearance) 5’5, long brown hair, light blue eyes, thin agile body structure.

Cloths) Blue combat suit or light green short dress, (With combat suit) Black shoulder, knee, and chest pads, Black combat shoes or green heals

Personality) Social, loving, dependant on others, hopeful, plays against the system.

Bio) Selena grew up in rich home with a great family. She was sent to school and became well educated. Her grandfather was rebel and had her with his giant boomerang, The Tear Lifter. She idolized her grandfather and wanted to like him. Against her parent’s wills, she would seek to a school of that taught boomerang ship. She devoted all her time to her training and came out at the top of her class. She became a rebel against the evil government and ran away from home to join the rebel forces in Maran. She now leads the raiding parties on government buildings.





The plot takes place in a futuristic fantasy world. I need help creating the last main female character.
I wish to pare Selena and Clairc together in the story. Notice how they are almost exact opposites.

I wish for the female character to pare up with Lugana.
Any Ideas of how she should act or what she should be?

The Thought Fox - January 28, 2004 10:51 AM (GMT)
Maybe she could be leading a raid, and he gets in the way. She could either try to recruit him (challenging him to a nice opening swordfight) or be annoyed with him that he's in the way. She could arrest him for obscuring what she's doing, or something.

DragonLady4 - January 28, 2004 03:17 PM (GMT)
ooh, how about someone who's grown up in a city, but on the streets?You don't seem to have someone from that background yet. She could be untrusting and self reliant, and Lugana saves her life when she is attacked by (insert something here) because he can't bear to let anyone die when he's around.
So then she trusts him a bit, and is intreiged by someone who would help her, and shadows him for a while, helping out, unnoticed...then she could actually travel or whatever you have planned with him. Maybe she could feel that she should owe him something for saving her.

thank you and goodnight. (or afternoon...) thats my 2 cents, or whatever :)

Eagle - January 29, 2004 09:50 PM (GMT)
DragonLady's idea is good!! THis character could fell she owes Laguna a life debt.

Lugana - January 30, 2004 03:31 AM (GMT)
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ooh, how about someone who's grown up in a city, but on the streets?You don't seem to have someone from that background yet. She could be untrusting and self reliant, and Lugana saves her life when she is attacked by (insert something here) because he can't bear to let anyone die when he's around.
So then she trusts him a bit, and is intreiged by someone who would help her, and shadows him for a while, helping out, unnoticed...then she could actually travel or whatever you have planned with him. Maybe she could feel that she should owe him something for saving her.

thank you and goodnight. (or afternoon...) thats my 2 cents, or whatever 



Hmmm…. That is a good idea Dragonlady4. It would make things more interesting. Again, good idea!

DragonLady4 - January 30, 2004 10:09 AM (GMT)
Thanks. I specialise in characters. :)

Green Child - February 9, 2004 11:10 AM (GMT)
k... cant help much, but juast wanted to say WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!




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